Authors: Dennis Larsen
each cup of her pushup bra and adjusted
herself accordingly, before pulling on the
slacks and slipping the shirt around her
shoulders.
Without much in store for the day,
other than work later in the afternoon for a
short shift, she had concluded to avoid the
yard work that needed to be done and
make a trip into town to check out the
farmers market and try to meet some
friends for a late lunch. Ms. Criddle was
not one to leave chores undone but she just
had a feeling this was going to be a very
special day and she didn’t want a few
menial chores to get in her way of
capitalizing on what the day may offer.
“First things first,” she thought.
“I’ll grab a quick bite then run down to the
gas station, fill up, wash the ‘stang; then
head to town. I wonder if that good
looking Russell, at the hardware store,
would be up for a visit from the hottest
babe in town?” her thoughts drifted, as she
opened her bedroom door and ambled
toward the kitchen.
“He’s probably pretty lonely since
his divorce was finalized, could use some
female companionship and maybe a
shoulder to cry on. Oh yeah, I’ll be
stopping by there today and...,” then aloud,
but not fully registering the import of what
stood before her, “What in the....,” and
then it hit her. “Oh my gosh, oh my gosh!”
she screamed, turning circles in the
kitchen, unsure where to go or what to do,
but her stomach forced the issue sending
her running for the kitchen sink where she
vomited up the remains of her dinner the
night before.
She stood at the sink, spitting,
mind reeling, unsure of what to do next.
“Think, think!” she told herself, “don’t
panic, get a grip!” The distressed widow
slowly turned to take in the horror that
was her kitchen. There before her was the
kitchen table with all six chairs arranged
in a pyramid on top of the table, balanced
perfectly. She stepped to the backdoor to
see if it was securely locked. It was. She
carefully walked around the table as not to
disturb the structure but to get a closer
look, still in shock that someone or
something had been in her home and had
done such a thing. As she ringed the table,
she spotted something nestled between the
legs of two chairs a bit higher than she
could reach. It appeared to be a small
piece of paper or perhaps a photograph.
“Dear God, what’s happening?”
she whispered, tears staining her blouse.
Katie finally got enough of a grip on her
emotions that she realized she needed to
call the authorities. “The phone, where
did I leave that damn phone?” questioning
herself out loud. The sound of her voice
seemed to offer some degree of comfort
and safety. Her mind shot scenarios at her
faster than she could compute them but one
stood out more than the others. “What if
he’s still in the house? WHAT IF HE’S
STILL IN THE HOUSE!”
“Got to get the police and get out
of here,” she continued to talk to herself.
She suddenly remembered seeing the
phone near the sink after she’d showered.
Without hesitating she quickly made her
way back to her bedroom, peering into the
laundry room and spare bedroom as she
passed, hoping not to see anything out of
the ordinary, and she didn’t. The phone
was next to the sink as she had thought.
Rapidly she dialed 911 and waited trying
to contain her breathing, feeling a bit light
headed.
There was an answer at the other
end, “9-1-1, what is the nature of your
emergency?”
Now whispering as not to alert an
intruder if he was, in fact, still inside the
home, “Someone broke into my house and
I’m not sure if he’s still here, son of a
bitch stacked my chairs on my table,”
Katie slowly started back down the
hallway to the kitchen.
“Excuse me, he did what?” the
operator seated inside the Lowndes
County Sheriff’s Office inquired.
“He piled my kitchen chairs on the
table like a pyramid thingy. I need some
help, please send somebody!”
“I’ve got officers responding;
please confirm your address for me, okay.
Stay on the line, don’t do anything but stay
on the phone with me. Is he still in the
house?” she asked firmly.
“I don’t know, I don’t know, I
don’t dare look around. What do I do if
he’s here?” tearfully whispered the
terrified woman back into the receiver.
“Listen to me, is this Katherine
Criddle?” no reply. “Katherine, you with
me, don’t leave the phone, are you with
me?” the operator said forcefully, trying to
keep the victim’s attention.
“Yeah, I’m here, I’m so scared,
please help me, please send somebody!”
she sobbed into the phone; tears running
incessantly down her cherry cheeks.
“Okay Katherine, I want you to get
out of the house, can you do that? I want
you to get to the front door and get out of
there and wait for the officers in the street.
You hear me? Get out of there now!”
“Okay, okay I can see the front
door from here,” she said, moving toward
the living room and her escape.
“No, No, No! Please no! Why me?
I... I... I …...” Screaming ,then silence.
The 911 operator listened. Nothing.
“Katherine! Mrs. Criddle what’s
happened? Can you hear me?” She
pressed her ear firmly to the headset,
trying to draw any possible response from
the petrified woman. Then she heard it,
very faint, very light, but the unmistakable
sound of someone breathing, almost
snoring, coming from within the living
room of 412 Big Buck Circle.
The operator, knowing that only
one Sheriff’s Unit was available to
respond, called upon the help of the
Valdosta PD and emergency fire and
ambulance crews to assist as well.
Multiple squad cars and emergency
vehicles from the county and city were
soon rushing to aid the victim, her
circumstances unknown.
At the same time the 911 operator
was scrambling help to Katherine’s
location, Blanche was standing in the
shade of one of the larger trees populating
the grounds of the old library, having an
early morning banter with Mr. Marcus.
Suddenly, they saw the first squad car
speed through the intersection, lights and
sirens blaring, sending pedestrians running
for the safety of the sidewalks.
“Whoa,
what’s
that
about?”
Marcus hollered above the sounds of the
sirens. Blanche shrugged her shoulders,
thinking of the next barb she might send
his way, when a second unit roared past
the two, again with lights and sirens going.
“Quite a bit of excitement for little
old Valdosta this morning, eh Marcus?
You forget to turn off your stove after you
brewed your coffee or something?” she
jokingly put forth.
“Now that you mention it, the Mrs.
said something about mowing the lawn
this morning, hope she didn’t cut her foot
off or anything. Don’t think the insurance
will cover that,” he replied sarcastically.
A couple of miles away the
students on the college campus were also
alarmed at the number of sirens they were
hearing.
“Must be quite the emergency,
sounds like the entire force is on the move
this morning,” Seymour said to the cute
freshman, standing with him just outside
the athletic department.
He’d just finished his morning
workout and shower when he’d heard the
commotion and hustled outside to see
what was afoot.
She adoringly looked up at the
older, more experienced college student,
batted her eyes a few times and replied.“
Maybe there’s some crazy person on
campus running around with a gun or
something. Might be safer if we go to my
dorm room and wait this little emergency
out.”
The innuendo and offer were
totally lost on Seymour who took a few
steps closer in the direction of the noise
and inferred, “No, don’t think this is a
campus issue, sounds are moving away
from downtown rather than coming toward
us.”
The young lady, disappointment
showing on her face, pulled her book and
binder to her chest, rocked herself from
the waist up and said in childish tone,
“Won’t you at weast walk me to my next
cwass, I’m a wittle sceawwed?”
Seymour turned to address the
persistent young lady when the sound of
another siren caught his ear, this one
moving quickly in their direction. She
advanced the couple of steps to join
Seymour at his side, ran a hand between
his side and arm and pulled his bicep to
her breast and laid her head against his
shoulder, appreciating the bulge that was
there. More students filled the empty
spaces around the two as the sounds
approached. Questions filled the air in
shouted tones to get above the sound of the
multiple sirens.
The freshman, lost in the thrill of
holding the older student so close, forgot
about the possible threat at hand, and
nuzzled her face against Seymour who
seemed unaware of her affections. Within
a moment or two an ambulance could be
seen weaving its way between stalled
traffic, working its way down the main
boulevard, followed closely behind by a
fire engine, lights reflecting off the
buildings and sirens screaming. The group
of students, including Seymour with the
cute student latched on, surged to the street
in an effort to get a better view and
postulate what might be happening. To the
relief of the young lady the emergency
vehicles advanced beyond the college and
raced toward their ultimate destination.
“Good crap, are they ever in a
hurry. What could they be up to this early
in the morning?” Seymour said, more to
himself than to anyone in particular.
“Well, I surely don’t know, but I’d
sure like to spend some more time with
you this morning,” she said, pulling his
arm close and rubbing it suggestively
against her clad bosom. Once she’d gotten
his attention and she could see that he was
looking directly into her eyes, she
continued, “If you know what I mean?”
winking.
“Oh, yeah, I mean no, really I’d
love to hang out with you for awhile this
morning but I’ve got a project I’ve got to
get together and need to hit the library
before my noon class,” he tripped over his
tongue but he was sure she’d gotten the
message.
“You sure? I think I can make it
worth your while,” she said; in her best
Southern drawl in a final attempt to sway
her crush.
“I really appreciate the offer;
maybe another day.” Pulling him away
from her grasp and waving as he jogged
toward the library, Blanche foremost on
his mind.
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
A light breeze swayed the limbs of
the old oak tree just outside the second
story window of Blanche’s room. Spanish
moss hung in great sheets from the angled
branches, some extending almost to the
ground, casting spider web like shadows
on the bedspread upon which Blanche lay.
The fleeing sunlight, all but gone for the
day, Blanche lay meditating, as she
always did upon completing a novel,
absorbing the full impact and importance
of the words that had so touched her soul
over these past two weeks. She loved a
book that could pull her into the pages and
make her a part, as had
Mandingo.
The beating of her heart could be
felt, her hand resting there, her eyes
closed, lost in the story, mingling it with
her own life and journey. She thought of