Authors: Dennis Larsen
stood before the map on the wall. He
pinned Blanche’s picture carefully to the
side of the map and took a small ribbon of
very fine thread, wound it around the head
of the pin holding the picture and attached
it to another pin stuck in the map precisely
at the address of Ms. Carmichael’s Bed
and Breakfast. He smiled and enjoyed
thinking about how clever he was.
“This gig is turning out to be more
fun than I’d expected,” he thought.
A third and a fourth image were
prominently displayed on the wall as
well, both held in place by pins as the
others, with thread leading to a location
on the map, 412 Big Buck Circle. The first
of the images was that of a bungalow set
on a lot with large, mature trees shielding
the entrance, and a driveway that ran
along the side of the house leading to a
small garage in the back. The home
appeared to be fairly new with no toys
strewn across the yard and no signs of a
pet. The newly, self-discovered voyeur
had studied the pictures carefully.
Each photo that had been included
in the packet, delivered under the cover of
night, had bits of information that would
be crucial for his success, and he had
committed them to memory along with the
floor plan and layout of the home. The
other picture was that of an attractive
middle-aged woman dressed in jeans and
t-shirt, with short-cropped brown hair,
tinted with streaks of gold. It had been
taken while the woman was shopping,
without her having a clue that she was
under surveillance.
Her name was Katherine Criddle
but she preferred to be called Katie. The
50ish woman had been widowed over ten
years ago and lived on her own in the
pictured home, and drove a vintage
mustang that she had purchased with some
of the insurance money that had come her
way after the death of her husband. At the
time, the car had brought her some degree
of solace, but she had been criticized for
what some perceived as giving in to her
midlife crisis. Katie dated little but
worked full time at the local Piggly
Wiggly as a cashier and counted her co-
workers as her closest friends. She had
one grown child that lived in Jacksonville,
Florida, and worked as a manager of a
restaurant. Her son was married but had
no children and did not visit his mother
often and generally only on holidays.
The home in question was at the
end of a cul-de-sac and would offer
access from the rear over a fence that
backed onto a green belt, with no houses
within distance to see him either coming
or going. The thief reviewed the items he
would be taking with him again, checked
to make sure the camera had fresh
batteries, and that all else was ready for
the outing.
Earlier in the day he had taken a
rasping file to the bottom of his athletic
shoes to wear away any possible
identifying marks that could be used to
trace what type of shoe he was wearing.
Tomorrow
he
would
be
burning
everything in a 50-gallon drum at the back
of his property for good measure anyway.
Knowing that it was going to be a very
long night he took one final look at the
board and the faces looking back at him.
He blew a kiss intended for all three
ladies pictured there and left the hiding
place, closed the wall unit to secure the
room and laid down on the couch for a
quick nap before having to head out once
it was dark.
He pulled the van quietly, without
trying to draw attention to himself, into a
parking spot near the dumpster at the back
of Saints and Sinners, a bar located about
two miles from the Criddle home. It was
the closest place he had scouted that
would keep the vehicle under wraps, until
he could return after the outing, without it
appearing to be out of place. The bar
would be open till almost morning and the
old van would blend in with the other
customer’s cars parked around the area.
He arrived at 11:30 p.m. and waited for a
biker couple to park their Harley and enter
the bar before he exited the van and
started the walk to Big Buck Circle.
He stayed off the main roads and
tried his best to look like any other
hitchhiker or homeless person getting from
point A to point B with a backpack, a
bandana around his head and nothing else
that would distinguish him from the
normal late night crowd. Traffic was light
and he worked his way through some
fields, in and out of a few dimly lit
neighborhoods, until he arrived at the
fence dividing the yard of Katie’s home
and the green space behind.
A train track was approximately
100 yards from the home that had not been
included in the information provided by
the anonymous supplier. He quickly and
easily scaled the fence, once on the other
side, he could see that the lights in the
home appeared to be off with no back
porch light, and no street light to brighten
the backyard space. Pulling the sleeve up
on his black shirt he could see the
illuminated dial of his watch, 12:15 a.m.,
he’d made good time and was earlier than
he dared enter the home. The professional
burglar felt in the front pocket of his dark
jeans and secured the key deposited there.
It wouldn’t hurt to at least try the
lock to be sure that his entry would be
unencumbered, so he purposefully took the
backpack from around his shoulder and
laid it down on the porch. Painstakingly he
eased the screen door open just enough to
allow access to the locked handle of the
wooden inner door. The screen squeaked
ever so slightly, just enough to cause him
some concern. Reaching into the pack he
removed a small can of WD-40 and
applied a quick blast to the hinges. The
door now glided open without a whisper
and he placed the door against his back as
he inserted the key into the lock.
The key fit perfectly and he felt
somewhat guilty about entering this way,
after all he was a pro and didn’t need the
extra help to gain entrance, but the
‘employers’ had insisted that he use the
means they provided to leave minimal
clues and shake up the public even further.
He placed his ear very close to the glass
insert in the rear door to confirm no one
was still moving about inside before he
tried to turn the key. His heart raced as his
adrenalin began to kick in and his senses
were heightened to the level of a world-
class athlete. No sounds reverberated
through the glass and he felt it safe to try
the lock. He turned his wrist but the key
did not budge.
“What the hell,” he thought, and he
exerted more pressure on the lock without
success.
The key was pulled free of the
lock and he inspected it the best he could
in the non-existent light. He ran his fingers
over the ridges of the key, feeling for burs
or irregularities, nothing. Once again the
key was inserted into the lock making sure
that it hit bottom and he turned, still
nothing, and he dared not force the key any
more to prevent it from breaking off in the
lock.
Somewhere in his memory he
recalled his father complaining about a
new house key he’d had cut that wouldn’t
work. They had returned to the True Value
store and the clerk had instructed them to
wiggle the key up and down while turning.
Apparently, it was not uncommon for new
keys to take a few weeks of use before
they wore down slightly and worked more
efficiently, especially in older locks.
It was still too early to try such an
experiment with this particular key and he
opted to wait until 1:00 a.m. before trying
again. He picked up his bag and moved to
a shadowed corner of the yard and sat in
the dark, waiting for the next few minutes
to pass. While waiting, he removed the
camera from the bag and tested the image
quality by taking a picture of the back of
the house. Not bad, but not great either and
he dared not use the flash, at least not
outside where it could be seen for miles.
Instead he changed the setting for shooting
night scenes, opened up the aperture and
took a picture of the house again with his
face smiling into the camera, taking up a
third of the image.
“Good start,” he thought, before
returning the camera to the bag.
At exactly 1:00 a.m. he brought the
key back to the lock and gently jiggled it
up and down while applying some
rotational force. Click! It moved and the
sound of the lock giving way brought a
sigh of relief to his lips. He very carefully
and slowly opened the door, feeling for
any obstruction that may bang against the
back of the door that he had not
anticipated. Nothing. It opened enough for
him to slide in, including his bag, leaving
his shoes on the porch.
He wore latex gloves without the
powder, a hair net under the bandana
wrapped firmly around his head. Black
makeup had been smeared over the
surface of his face while he had sat in the
corner of the yard, not so much to assist
while in the house but just in case he
needed to make a quick getaway, he’d be
harder to see moving outdoors. The first
thing he needed to do was secure the
location and make sure Katie was in the
bedroom asleep.
He had looked over the pictures
and schematic of the interior enough that
he felt like he had been there before, but
of course he had not. He left the kitchen,
turned down a narrow hallway, passed a
bathroom and laundry room on his right
and a spare bedroom on his left. Katie’s
room was directly at the end of the hall.
There were no lights on and the door was
open about ten inches.
At the door, he stood holding his
breath and listened. He could just make
out the rhythmic breathing of someone
sleeping so he pushed the door open just
enough to poke his head around to get a
look at the widow. The room was not
entirely dark; an en suite bathroom
positioned toward the front of the house
had the door slightly ajar and the light on.
He didn’t find this unusual, as his parents
had done the same thing for years when
they’d gotten older, made it so much
easier to get to the toilet in the middle of
the night without breaking one’s neck.
He could make out Katherine’s
form in the bed. She was lying on her right
side, head on a pillow with a sheet
covering her, except for her left leg
extending from underneath the sheet, lying
atop another pillow in the middle of the
bed. Her left arm wrapped tightly around
the top of the same pillow pulling it close
to her chest. The in and out of her
breathing was almost hypnotic and helped
him relax as he surveyed the room. The
foot of the bed faced the door and the
lighting from the bathroom would provide
better pictures when he was ready.
He pulled the door closed, not
letting the latch catch but having the jam
provide enough friction that the door was
almost shut, and he returned to the kitchen.
On the table he removed the camera from
the bag, along with a can of red spray
paint and four flat pieces of plastic, which
he would soon use to help him move the
heavier pieces of furniture. First off he
needed something to eat.
Opening the fridge with his gloved
hand, he looked for something that struck
his fancy. Orange juice and milk made him
think of breakfast so he removed the two