Warbreaker (101 page)

Denth is the better duelist. Even if Vasher hadn’t been beaten and tortured, Denth would have won. Except for the trick Vasher was planning, which Vivenna interfered with. But we don’t know about that yet...

I don’t know if you remember that Vivenna put a whole bunch of Breath into Tonk Fah’s cloak accidentally, but it happened during the time when she found Parlin. It might be just a little bit of a stretch here, as I don’t know that people will remember it. As I consider it, I should have mentioned what she’d done one more time.

Also, I hope that you don’t mind the line that goes something like “Vasher is plunging to his doom from a three story window—of course he’ll live!” It’s a little bit self-aware, and I’m not trying to break the fourth wall. Denth has simply known Vasher for a very, very long time, and knows that something so simple isn’t likely to kill his old friend. That, mixed with Denth’s penchant for sarcasm, produced this line.

Vasher Runs along the Blocks, Then Fights the Soldiers, and Finally Pulls Nightblood

In my annotations, I’ve often talked about focus scenes. These are the scenes of a book that I imagine cinematically before I sit down and write the novel. They’re part of what drives me to want to work on that book in particular, and I need a few really good ones before I’ll write a book.

This was one of the primary focus scenes for this book. I had this in mind before I developed a lot of the rest of the story. I’m glad that I was able to write to a point where I was able to use it. Vasher, Awakening a rope to save himself, then fighting alongside Awakened sets of clothing. Then finally, at long last, drawing Nightblood. You probably knew that had to happen in this book. I certainly built up to it long enough.

I originally imagined the pulling of Nightblood from a body a little like a dark “sword in the stone” moment. I don’t think that quite made the transition to the final book, but hopefully the image of a black sword leaking smoke is visually potent for you. I ended the scene in my head with Vasher standing amid those puffs of black smoke that used to be bodies, Nightblood at his side, feeding off of him with pulsing black veins.

Denth Finds Vasher at the End and Forces him to Duel

Note that Denth, way back many chapters ago, mentioned that he felt the only way to defeat Vasher was to get him to draw Nightblood. Denth knew that would leak away all of Vasher’s Breath and thereby leave him unable to use Nightblood any further. (This exchange with Denth and Tonk Fah happened in the D’Denir garden after meeting with the forgers.)

Denth has been planning to find a way to force Vasher to draw the sword and use it. He was hoping that the sword would consume him, which he felt would be a fitting end for Vasher, considering that Vasher killed Denth’s sister with Nightblood. When he didn’t die from pulling the blade, Denth decided that killing him with a dueling blade—as Arsteel should have—would be a fitting end instead.

Back to Chapter Fifty-Six

Annotations for Chapter Fifty-Seven

Siri Is Led Up to a Room With an Altar

Well, welcome to my favorite chapter in the book. (Of course, I do tend to say that about the climactic chapters of each book.) For me, this is the kind of chapter that drives one to write a book. The chance to get to it, and to have things start coming together, is the biggest thrill I get in writing.

The “sacrifice Siri on the altar” image was one of the original ones I’d planned for this book, but by the time I got to this place in the novel, it just felt lame to go through with that. It’s such a clichéd image. That’s kind of the point—Bluefingers is trying for something visceral and exaggerated—but I felt that the imagery of it could undermine the entire scene.

I think I did one draft with her tied down to it, but I revised that out pretty quickly. It was far too Snidely Whiplash for me. I like this version much better, where we find out what Bluefingers is going to do, but Siri stands up to him and bullies him into letting her die with dignity. I also went back and seeded the stories about Hallandren and killing people on altars as a superstitious rumor that some Idrians believe. (There were stories about the Mormons, back in the day, claiming that they sacrificed women on the altars of their temples then threw the corpses out the window into the Great Salt Lake. Sounds ridiculous, I know, but in eras without as much media, people can believe some pretty crazy things.)

Vasher and Denth Spar; Vasher Gets Stabbed

I love scenes in books (when I read them) that imply a great weight of history that we don’t get to see between characters. It gives me a sense that the story is real. That these characters lived before the story, and that they’ll continue to live after (or, well, the ones who survive).

When I built this book, I knew that the Vasher/Denth relationship needed a lot of groundwork to give it that sense. I wanted them both to be complicated characters who have a twisted past. It all comes to head here, in this chapter, and we get the ending of a story over three centuries old. Will I ever tell those stories? Probably not. Like the story of Alendi and Rashek in
Mistborn
, I think the story between Vasher and Denth is stronger as it stands—as something to lend weight to this book. We will go more into the Vasher/Arsteel relationship (particularly as we deal with Yesteel) in the next book, if I write it.

By this point, you should be wondering just who Vasher is. He’s been alive since the Manywar, and Denth implies that Vasher himself caused the conflict. There’s a lot more going on with him, obviously, than you expect.

Lightsong’s Climactic Scene, With His Vision of the Boat

Lightsong’s vision and eventual death in this chapter are another of the big focus scenes. In fact, I’d say that this little scene here is my absolute favorite in the book. It’s hard to explain why, but I get a chill whenever I read it. It’s the chill of something that you plan turning out even better than you expect. (As opposed to the planning for the Siri/altar image, which turned out poorly and so had to be cut.)

I worked hard to bring this scene in my head to fruition. No other section of the book has been tweaked more in drafting—everything from changing it so Lightsong grabs the God King’s hand as opposed to his foot, to reworking the imagery of the ocean. (That imagery, by the way, came from my honeymoon while standing on the cruise ship at night and staring into the churning white froth above deep black water.)

Many people on my forums called this event ahead of time—Lightsong healing the God King. I’m fine with that. It
did
seem like a very obvious setup. One character with powers he cannot use until healed; another with the power to heal someone one time. Sometimes it’s okay to give people what they expect—particularly when the result is this scene. I hope they didn’t expect it to be as powerful as it is (assuming readers like the scene as much as I do). I want this one to be very moving.

It’s the final fulfillment of Lightsong’s character. Note that even in the end, his sarcasm and irony come through. He told Siri not to depend on him in the end because he would let her down. Well, Lightsong, you’re a better man than you wanted us to believe. There’s a reason why so many are willing to rely upon you.

Vasher and Denth’s Climax

I wanted to offer Denth the chance for redemption here, though there was no way he was going to let himself take it. His response is honest. He doesn’t feel he deserves it. He has done terrible things; to wipe away the memory of them would be cheating. Better to just get it over with.

There’s a very good chance that after killing Vasher, Denth would have walked over, picked up Nightblood, and let the sword drain his life away. He wouldn’t have been able to live with the guilt.

But that doesn’t happen. When I first designed this magic system, I added to it the idea that taking a lot of Breath shocks you and sends you into a small seizure of pleasure. This is lifted from the magic system in
Mythwalker
, the story from which I drew Siri and Vivenna. I added the component to Awakening not only because it fit, but because I liked giving one more little nod to
Mythwalker
.

However, the moment I began writing it, I knew that this twist of giving someone Breath, then killing them, would be an awesome way to pull a reversal with the magic. So I built into the story the entire arc of Vasher beating Arsteel mysteriously, and Denth wanting to duel him to prove that he couldn’t win a duel.

Denth was right. Vasher cheated.

Both of these scenes end with a transfer of Breath. That’s intentional; I placed these scenes together intentionally. I love the parallel of one transfer bringing life and hope, the other bringing death.

And by the way, we don’t see Tonk Fah, Jewels, or Clod again in the book. They’ll come back in the sequel. Without Denth’s control, Tonks is off to start murdering and killing wantonly; by the next book, he’ll have changed quite dramatically.

Jewels, on the other hand, is taking Arsteel (Clod) to his brother, who is a master of Lifeless Commands. (Yesteel invented ichor-alcohol.) She hopes to find a way to restore to Arsteel some of his memories and personality.

Siri Is Rescued

And here we have a big scene that a lot of readers have been waiting for. I apologize for making Siri need to be rescued like this, but I felt it was appropriate to the story. It’s because of her teaching the God King and helping him become the man he is that he’s able to do this.

Remember that the Seventh Heightening (I think it’s that one) grants a person Instinctive Awakening, meaning that once you reach that Heightening, you don’t need any practice to learn to Awaken. Your Commands are obeyed instinctively. This doesn’t mean that everything you try will work, but that you can make most basic Commands (grab things, that sort) work without having to try. In fact, figuring out most of the more complicated, previously unknown Commands requires a person to be of the Seventh Heightening.

This power grew out of me wanting the upper Heightenings to do some very dramatic things. I do worry that this scene is a little deus ex machina. That keeps me from liking it quite as much as the Lightsong climax or the Denth/Vasher climax. But I feel that a story needs a great variety of climactic moments—some internal character moments, some external skill moments, some great twists, some expected payoffs, some big reveals, and some dramatic rescues. This chapter and the next take a shot at trying to cover a lot of those different types.

Back to Chapter Fifty-Seven

Annotations for Chapter Fifty-Eight

Vasher Finds Vivenna

I’m torn about this ending. It seems like this last chapter is a little anticlimactic, and yet at the same time, there is still the major conflict of the book to resolve.

Or is it the major conflict of the book? Probably not, as I think about it. This book’s major conflicts were character conflicts. Yes, we want to save Idris, and it’s important—but what happens with the characters has overshadowed that, I think. Perhaps that’s why this chapter feels just a bit tacked on. It’s not as bad as the
Well of Ascension
second ending, however, and I think it’s about the best way to format this story. That doesn’t stop it from feeling a little extraneous, though.

Anyway, a lot of important things happen here. Note that Nightblood doesn’t remember being drawn. When he was created, the Breaths gave him sentience as planned. (That was a big part of the goal in making him—to prove the existence of Type Four BioChromatic entities.) However, once he is drawn, his Command takes force and he acts much more like a regular Awakened object—only one with very strange abilities and powers. During this time, his Breath is diverted to creating the powers, and his mind goes fuzzy.

Siri and Susebron Go Down to Visit the body of Lightsong

I just wanted to have this scene as a little epilogue to Lightsong’s storyline. He was a great character, one of the best I’ve ever written, and I think he fulfilled his place in this book wonderfully.

I often say that I don’t see my endings as sad, even though they do tend to involve the deaths of major characters. In this case, Lightsong’s ending is triumphant because of what he was able to achieve. At least that’s my perspective on it.

What did Blushweaver achieve? In fact, she Returned in the first place to be involved in this ending as well. One thing to note about the Returned coming back is that they
do
, see the future, but when they Return, they aren’t guaranteed to be able to change anything. Before her Return, Blushweaver was a powerful merchant in the city, and very well known. She died from assassination after denouncing a group of dye merchants she’d worked with for their deceptive and criminal practices. Her testimony ended with them in jail, but it got her killed. That’s how she earned the title of Blushweaver the Honest (which, if you’ll remember, she eventually got changed to Blushweaver the Beautiful).

She Returned because she didn’t want T’Telir to fall to the invaders she saw taking it after Bluefingers and the others caused their revolt. That’s why she gathered the armies. While she didn’t succeed in her quest as well as Lightsong did, she did help out quite a bit. I think she’s pleased, on the other side, with how things turned out.

Vivenna and Vasher Talk about What to Do

One of the biggest revisions to the ending was what to do with the D’Denir. When first drafting the book, I wasn’t 100% sure on what Awakening could and couldn’t do. I figured that Vasher could have Commands that would Awaken statues, and I wrote the ending that way.

Unfortunately, through revising and developing the story, this ended up not being viable. I was also disappointed in how poorly telegraphed the use of the statues ultimately ended up being. So in revisions, I switched it to make them Lifeless created from bones, something special that Vasher came up with during the Manywar. I then added the concept of Kalad’s Phantoms as a mystery in the book, so that readers would be expecting that army to show up by the ending. I think this mitigates the surprise somewhat. (Though not completely; see below.)