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Authors: Joe Dever

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Lukha
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Action Chart
).’ with ‘
Action Chart
.)’. Replaced ‘forms, and’ with ‘forms and’. Replaced ‘weak it’ with ‘weak, it’. Replaced ‘Kai rank you have attained above the rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘Kai Mastery you have attained above the rank of Kai Grand Guardian’.

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Section 86
).

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Hulka
’ with ‘ ‘Hulka’ ’. Replaced ‘
Khula
’ with ‘ ‘Khula’ ’. Replaced ‘
Lukha
’ with ‘ ‘Lukha’ ’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.

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Teleport
and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.

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) Replaced ‘mind-force’ with ‘Mindforce’. Replaced ‘formidable Kai-screen absorbs and deflects’ with ‘formidable psychic defences absorb and deflect’, as you may have arrived here from
Section 59
where you do not possess Kai-screen.

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Rhunotar
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunotar’ ’. Replaced ‘
Rhunadan
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced ‘
Rhunaguin
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunaguin’ ’. Replaced ‘form, and the sudden cessation of mind contact, throws’ with ‘form — and the sudden cessation of mind contact — throws’. Replaced ‘Darkness — you’ with ‘Darkness: you’.

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Section 115
and
Section 255
).

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The Legacy of Vashna
Sections 152 and 254. Replaced ‘item — the Scarab of the Wingless Dragon — which’ with ‘item, the Scarab of the Wingless Dragon, which’.

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Counterspell
’. Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal’.

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Rhunotar
’ with ‘ ‘Rhunotar’ ’. Replaced ‘ends here’ with ‘end here’.

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Kai!
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Khula
’ with ‘ ‘Khula’ ’. Replaced ‘transformation, then’ with ‘transformation; then’. Replaced ‘pit and’ with ‘pit, and’.

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Levitation
spell’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘land and you’ with ‘land, and you’.

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) Added ‘You decide to explore the perimeter of the undergrowth and have walked almost a mile along its edge before you come across the remnants of a path which leads into the jungle's dark interior. Cautiously you advance along this overgrown trail, but you have not gone far before you are forced to a halt by a thick curtain of hanging vines and creepers.’, copied from
Section 255
(cf. the Errata for
Section 85
and
Section 255
).

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The Dungeons of Torgar
Section 1). Replaced ‘Thane’ with ‘Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘words; they’ with ‘words: they’. Replaced ‘captured by evil’ with ‘captured by Evil’. Replaced ‘Paido — the’ with ‘Paido, the’. Replaced ‘Adamas — the Lord Constable of Garthen — who’ with ‘Adamas, the Lord Constable of Garthen, who’. Replaced ‘Jarel — the’ with ‘Jarel, the’. Replaced ‘partizan’ with ‘partisan’. Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.

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Lightning Hand
.’. Replaced ‘proves insufficient’ with ‘prove insufficient’. Replaced ‘Sommerswerd, or’ with ‘Sommerswerd or’.

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