Tender is the Night (52 page)

P

Penguin Books edition, Harmondsworth, 1982, 1986

I

First American edition: Charles Scribner's Sons, New York, 1934 (fourth printing 1951)

S

Serial publication:
Scribner's Magazine
, January–April 1934; book galleys were set from S

I–B

First British edition: Chatto & Windus, London, 1934

F

Fitzgerald's copy (Princeton University Library); annotated
c.
1938

POR

The Portable Scott Fitzgerald
: Viking Press, New York, 1945

C

ed. Malcolm Cowley: Charles Scribner's Sons, New York, 1951 (‘With the Author's Final Revisions')

BH

The Bodley Head, London, 1959

M

Matthew J. Bruccoli, “Materials for a Centenary Edition of
Tender is the Night
”
Studies in Bibliography
, XVII (1964), pp. 177–93

g

galley

rbg

revised book galley

urbg

unrevised book galley

cts

carbon typescript

Epig. 1

night
, C;
night
… I

Epig. 5

“Ode … Nightingale” B130; Ode … Nightingale. I

11.30

Hôtel I–B; Hotel I

13.30

Golfe-Juan P; Golfe Juan I

18.14

Antheil B140:9; Anthiel I

18.16

Ulysses
S; Ulysses I

19.6

Ulysses
S; Ulysses I

21.20

was C; were I

22.22

the Pont I–B; The Pont I

22.23

Amphitheatre S, I–B; Ampitheatre I

23. 15–16

“Nice Carnival Song” M; Nice Carnival Song I

23.18

citronnade P; citronade I

23.29

Hôtel I–B; Hotel I

23.32

valuation P; valuations I

23.34

czar C; Czar I

24. 3–4

bookshops I–B; book shops I

24.16

Hôtel I–B; Hotel I

24.27

that S; the I

25.14

was C; were I

25.25

character, C; character I

26.2

swimming. I–B; swimming, I

28.27

head, P; head I

28.30

Señor C; Signor I

29.13

umbrella, C; umbrella. I

31.13

as nearly sulky S; nearly as sulkily I

31.14

la P; La I

31.22

dwarf P; dwarfed I

35.2

Siena C; Sienna I

42.8

Divers' S, I–B; Diver's I

43.16

Viking madonna P; viking Madonna I; viking madonna C

44.20

sentiment was I–B; sentiment, was I

47.10

Iles de Lérins C; Isles des Lerins I

49.14

Hôtel I–B; hotel I

53.31

cavalry: I–B; cavalry. I

58.36

Juan-lcs-Pins P; Juan les Pins I

62.18

chair … POR; chair…. I

64.1

Saints P; Saintes I

64.1, 78.25, 79.11, 82.27, 104.19, 110.2, 116.26, 117.8 rue P; Rue I

65.15

Hermès P; Hermes I

66.29

Beaumont-Hamel C; Beaumont Hamel I

68.1

Undine
S, I–B; Undine I

68.3

Württemberg C; Wurtemburg I

69.32

were: S; were: I

70.6

Bananas” C; Bananas, “ I

70.11

Württembergers C; Wurtemburgers I

70.12

chasseurs alpins P; Chasseurs Alpins I; chasseurs Alpine B92:113

70.13

Old Etonians B140:70; old Etonians I

70.23

Arts POR; Art I

70.24

Hôtel POR; Hotel I

73.3

Mary, POR; Mary I

76.3, 8, 78.26

Mother POR; mother I

77.25

Paris, was C; Paris was I

78.7

Hôtel I–B; hotel I

79. 14–15

before. When C; before When I

79. 31–32

“Daddy's Girl” POR;
Daddy's Girl
I

80.5

Tanagra P; tanagra I

80.32

“Daddy's Girl” B140:84;
Daddy's Girl
I

81.39

Lutétia P; Lutetia I

82.3

(extra space between words) S; (no extra space) I; B140:85 (marginal note: “Please preserve extra large spaces between words”)

83.11

esoteric. No C; esoteric, no I

91.13

Champs-Élysées C; Champs Élysées I

91.19

Saint-Lazare C; Saint Lazare I

91.27, 334.27

beach C; Beach I

92.5, 228.32, 233.28, 249.27 someone C; some one I

101.29

friend S; friends I

104.19

Saints Anges P; Saintes-Anges I

105.12

through? S; through. I

106.30

Brizard C; Brizzard I

106.30

Fernet Branca C; André Fernet Blanco I

106.31

Rocher C; Rochet I

108.20

sergent de ville C; sergent-de-ville I;
sergent de ville
POR

110.26–7

Teput Dome P; teput dome I

111.20

Évreux C; Evreux I

112. 19–20

conservatism S, mss passim; conversation I

113.25

Mosby C; Moseby I

114. 10

concessionnaire C; concessionaire I;
concessionnaire
I–B

115.7

about C; of I

116.28

arrondissement C; arrondisement I;
arrondissement
POR

117.7, 11

Champs-Élysées C; Champs Élysées I

118.13

possibility S; responsibility I

119.4

states B141:132; States I

119.24

Latin Quarter C; French Latin quarter I

121.32

Third I–B; third I

125.32

Zürichsee B115:164, I–B; Zurichsee I

130.6

Damenstiftgasse C; Damenstiff Strasse I

130.38

at B150:35(g), F; in I

131.8

criterion C; criteria I

131.12

The Rose and the Ring
S, I–B; The Rose and the Ring I

131.31

yourself. Once F; yourself—once I

132.5

falsely POR; falsely, I

133.2

University P; university I

133.11

Zürichsee B100:230, I–B; Zurichsee I

133.16

Kraepelin F; Krapælin I

134.8

privates F; private soldiers I

134.13

“Toward F; “—toward I

134.13

Cedars C; ‘Cedars' I

134.38

Zürichsee B100:234, I–B; Zurichsee I

135. 30–31

Daddy-Long-Legs
B149:g51; “Daddy-Long-Legs” I

135.31

Molly-Make-Believe
, B149:g51; “Molly-Make-Believe,” I

135.35

Armistice P; armistice I

137.24

on B116:180; in I;
on
S and other mss

138.6

rhythms: P; rhythms. I

139.21 ff.

…. C: … I

140.3, 4

and C; and: I

144.20

Zürichsee B100:253, I–B; Zurichsee I

148.6

clinic C; Clinic I

148.6

Interlaken I–B; Interlacken I; Interlachen S

148.31

watch C; watch, I

148.37

so C; So I

149.21

captain P; Captain I; Captain Diver B116:201

150.13

Suppés C; Suppe's I

151.29

Swiss B100:267; Valais I; Swiss altered to Valois: B116:205; Valois S

151.32

him: P; him. I

152.4

‘A P; A I; “
A
B134:169

152.6

….' P; … I; …. M

152.11

complementary C; complimentary I

152.17

“Have P; “—Have I

153.19

service M; Service I

153.20

A Psychology for Psychiatrists.
I–B; “A Psychology for Psychiatrists.” I

154.7

one”— I–B; one—” I

154.9

suddenly, C; suddenly I

154.25

Glas Bier B100:274; Glas-Bier I

161.32

who S; whom I

162. 24–5

Pre-Kraepelin and Post-Kraepelin
C; Pre-Krapælin and Post-Krapælin I

after 162.29

(extra space between lines) B134:180, F; (no extra space) I

162. 33–38

*
Ein Versuch
…
entstanden sind.
POR; *Ein Versuch … entstanden sind. I

162.35

sie
POR; siz I

163.4

train-bands BH; trained-bands I; trained bands S, I–B; trainbands C

163. 14–15

la Tour de Peilz P; La Tour de Pelz I

163.17

down into port C; down port I (see B116:226)

163.37

confrère P; confrere I

164.1

Savoy before B100:291; Swiss Savoy I

164.8

Kursaal C; Kursal I

164.15

Défense de cueillir les fleurs. P;
Défense de cueillir les fleurs.
I

165.1

di P; de I

168.2

Vanity Fair B100:299; ‘Vanity Fair' I

168.3

schizoid S; schizzoid I

173.1

…. The P; … the I

173. 17–24

“
DEAR….WARREN.” P; DEAR … WARREN
. I

174.18

Zürichsee B116:246, I–B; Zurichsee I

176.27

cameriere C; camerière I;
cameriere
POR

176.35

“Good-by, B152:g1; “Good-bye, I

178.24

Affaires Étrangères POR;
Affaires Etrangères
I

178.27

Mistinguett P; Mistinguet I

178.32

mind—you've P; mind. You've I

179.24

Alliés S, I–B; Alliées I

180.5

“Nicole C; Nicole I; “
Nicole
S

180.6

Hands P; hands I;
Hands
S

181.20

Alliés S, I–B; Alliées I

181.25

“Nice Carnival Song,” C; Nice Carnival Song, I

183.27

McBeth I–B; MacBeth I

185.28

Hôtel I–B; Hotel I

186.21

menagerie C; Menagerie I

188.20

Juan-les-Pins P; Juan les Pins I

189.8

Sturmtruppen C;
Sturmtruppen
I

191.4

Gregorovious I—B; Gregorovius I

193.14

have B143:218; haven't I

193.24

Privatdocent S; Privat docent I

195. 29–30

Humpty Dumpty C; Humpty-Dumpty I

198.7

his bed-lamp C; his bed-lamp light I; the light S

200.6

roof, POR; roof I

201.17

uninstructed M; instructed I

202.13

torture, C; torture I

205.23

manic S; maniac I, B184:cts; manic (depressive: crossed out) B143:237

210.25

schizophrène P; schizophrêne I

212.16

Émile's C; Emile's I