Authors: Dennis Larsen
department, is having second thoughts
about the timing of this transaction. In the
past week alone we’ve seen the number of
condominiums on the market skyrocket in
the properties adjacent to this particular
section of land. The group is concerned
that perhaps the area is already saturated
and our intent would be to put more
multiunit housing projects in place. We’ve
also noted a downward trend in the real
market values of the homes in that
particular area as well. This is a difficult
trend for us to navigate when considering
a purchase so very close to this unusual
local phenomenon.” Not allowing Ms.
Davis a chance to ask any questions, he
pressed on, “I’m sure you’re well aware
of the problems they’re having, which
seem to be escalating, and we realize it
could all well be over within a day or two
but there is the remote possibility that it
could be years. We are just not willing to
assume the risk, at least not at this time.
We are terribly sorry, we understand that
you’ve put a great deal of work into the
sale and our negotiations, but we are well
within our legal rights to withdraw our
offer, which is what we intend to do, in
writing, this morning.”
It felt, to Beverly, like someone
had just run a dagger through her heart,
chest pain, unable to breath, anxiety and
anger rising, “I thought, I mean, this is
coming out of left field. Just yesterday we
were on track and there were no
problems. Surely the little blip in condo
prices is not enough to pull out of such an
amazing opportunity. This is literally one
of two parcels of land that will ever be
available to develop in the Northern
Valdosta Region. The upside is huge! I
can’t
believe
you’re
considering
withdrawing your offer. Perhaps if we just
met this morning and addressed your
concerns we could....”
He cut her off, “Ms. Davis, unless
you can assure us that the serial predator
stalking the people and homes in that area
can be stopped before we sign on the
dotted line, it’s just not going to happen.”
“What are you talking about? You
mean that thing with the guy that did those
break-ins over the past couple weeks?
He’s harmless, a prankster, hasn’t hurt
anybody. The cops think it’s just a couple
of kids playing games. You are seriously
going to cancel a multimillion dollar deal
because of that?” she incredulously asked.
“Ms. Davis,” he said, in a stern,
attention getting voice, “Have you not seen
the news this morning or read the paper?
This guy is for real, no college prankster;
the police are issuing warnings for people
living in that entire region. It’s just more
than we wish to engage at this time. Our
lawyers will be in touch with your office
later this morning. Again, we are truly
sorry, but business is business. Good
day.”
She couldn’t believe what she’d
just heard, another nail in her financial
coffin. The sale of the property would
have meant hundreds of thousands of
dollars in fees she would have collected,
the largest sale of her career, now
squashed by some pervert getting his
jollies. “Shit, shit, shit,” she hammered
out with increasing volume, “Why now?”
She circled the table talking to herself, “I
can’t frickin’ believe this, not now, not
when we were so close. Now what the
hell am I going to do? I’ll never find
another buyer like Okala.” Her mind going
a hundred miles an hour, she tried to
focus. What had he said about the news,
what news? She switched on the local
broadcast.
A strikingly beautiful blonde in a
business suit, just cut low enough to entice
the male audience, sat upright behind a
large, expansive desk, computer monitor
to her right and a stack of papers in her
hands. She looked to be all business this
morning, no sweet, sheepish grin, no funny
banter with the co-anchor, just right to the
facts. “Again, the Sheriff’s Department, by
way of Sheriff Lupo himself, has issued a
strict warning to the people living in the
area south and west of the Air Force Base.
There is a very real threat, as they’ve
concluded a serial predator is working the
aforementioned area and every caution
should be taken to secure your safety and
the safety of your home and family.”
“What has happened?” she thought.
“Come on, tell us what the hell has
happened since yesterday!” Bev screamed
at the television.
As if the female anchor had heard
her, she continued, “Let’s recap that story
again for those just joining us. Last night a
house on Lori Street was broken into
while the owners were out. The home
appeared to be ransacked in a search for
valuables and the couple has identified
numerous
items
missing
from
the
premises. Based on evidence at the scene,
the authorities believe the couple returned
home while the perpetrator was still
inside.
Fortunately
there
was
no
confrontation, but significant damage was
done to the home and the department was
unable to release more details this
morning. They will be holding a press
conference later in the day to keep the
public apprised of the investigation,
however, they did specify that this latest
break in is a significant escalation in the
violent nature of the crimes to date. They
are asking the public to report suspicious
individuals or behavior, particularly in the
area we’ve been talking about. The
Sheriff’s Department has set up a hotline
that you can call and we’ll put that on the
screen for you momentarily.”
Beverly sat back in her chair
staring blankly at the woman on the
screen. She was lost for words. She had
worked her ass off the past ten years,
married a husband with a defective heart,
inherited a jackass of a stepson, gained
fifty pounds, given up every opportunity
for another man in her life, and for what?
To have it all pulled out from underneath
her by a little prick breaking into people’s
homes. “Damn it!” she yelled, sweeping
her arm across the table sending the now
empty coffee cup sailing through the air,
shattering on the kitchen wall.
* * *
Blanche casually swung back and
forth on the porch of Caroline’s B&B
enjoying the light early morning breeze as
it helped dry the droplets of perspiration
that were still forming on her skin. She’d
kept her promise to herself to get out and
run this morning, had been more difficult
than expected but still felt great to stretch
out and feel the sun on her back as she
maneuvered the sidewalks, for three
miles, that felt like ten. She had only been
enjoying the porch swing for a few
minutes before Mrs. Muir joined her.
“Room for two?” she asked.
“Sure, if you don’t mind sitting
next to me while I sweat like a pig,”
Blanche said, with a smirk.
“Beautiful morning, just love it
when there’s enough of a breeze to
dampen this stifling humidity. Too bad the
news this morning is such a downer,”
Mrs. Muir said, trying to read Blanche to
see if she’d heard the latest details.
“Yeah, it is beautiful this morning,
but what news are you talking about?”
Happy that she got to be the bearer
of the bad news, Mrs. Muir expounded,
“Well, you know what’s been happening
in those homes up by the base, right?” She
didn’t wait for Blanche to reply. “There
was another one last night and they almost
caught him. Was in the house when the
couple got home. The Sheriff isn’t saying
much but I phoned that friend of mine, you
know the one I was telling you about?
Anyway, she said, and she has very good
connections, don’t you know. Well, she
said that the home of Mrs. Criddle, the
lady with the fake leg and the mustang, she
said, there was some warning written on
her living room wall in pig blood. Can
you imagine?” she said, excitedly.
“I hadn’t heard that, are you sure?”
Blanche questioned.
“Oh, I’m sure, she’s very reliable.
Then last night, and don’t tell anybody,
cause this isn’t supposed to be out, but last
night he killed something with a butcher
knife and a carving fork, I think she said it
was a pig, then wrote another warning on
the wall. Is that creepy or what? Don’t
know what this world is coming to.”
Blanche, at this point, had stopped
the leisurely sway of the swing and
listened intently to what the older woman
was saying, knowing to take it for what it
was, as she considered the source. “Was
anybody hurt, do you know?” she said,
staring into the street ahead of her.
“Sounds like the pig didn’t fair
very well,” she replied
“Those poor people, must have
been such a shock to them when they got
home. What kind of a person does this
kind of stuff? It sounds to me like he’s
getting bolder with each outing.” She
nailed it without knowing.
“Lots of f....ing punks out there,
that’s for sure,” the older woman said,
followed by, “Excuse me dear, don’t
normally like to use that word but
sometimes I just get so riled up.” They
laughed as Blanche reached over and
patted Mrs. Muir on the knee, assuring her
it was understandable.
They started up the swing again,
swaying back and forth in silence, each
putting into perspective the information
they had just shared. A few minutes later,
Blanche noted a small truck motoring
down the street in front of the B&B, the
driver blasted out a recognizable greeting
with the horn and Blanche stood and
waved as Jasper sailed by.
* * *
“Alright people, hold it down,
quiet down. Quiet down!” the Sheriff
elevated his voice above the commotion
in the main level conference room. “Let’s
have it quiet so we can get started.” He
waited for the chairs to fill and order to
be restored to the adrenalin filled room.
“Thank you, I know we’ve all been up
long hours already,” he said, looking at
his watch, 1:00 p.m. “I’d like to start with
an overview of where we are with the
first two cases before we jump into the
one from this morning.”
“Arlene, I know you’ve been
compiling
and
coordinating
the
information as it’s come in, where do we
stand?” Sheriff Lupo directed his question
to the woman seated directly to his right
with laptop computer open, frantically
taking notes. Not accustom to having to
speak to such a large group of people, she
tried to ignore that anyone else was
present, and looked directly at her friend
‘The Wolf’ and spoke.
“I wish I could tell you that we
know more today than we did a few days
ago, but the truth of the matter is, we
don’t. The hotline has provided leads but
most resulting in dead ends or nut jobs
reporting their disgruntled neighbor as
The Stalker. We’re checking them as fast
as we can but no solid leads yet.” She
turned her attention momentarily to the
group around the table. “I just want to
thank ya’ll for your hard work and for
putting up with me calling at all hours of
the night. I appreciate your cooperation.”
She returned her remarks to the Sheriff,
“We were able to get a good casting of the
prints left in the backyard of the Criddle
woman’s home. Forensics should be able
to tell us more on that.”
“Ricky, you in here?” Sheriff Lupo