Warbreaker (89 page)

He doesn’t really believe he can do it, though. Life has proven to Denth lately that he just has to do bad things. He almost sees it as inevitable.

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Annotations for Chapter Fourteen

Lightsong and Blushweaver

This is another of the scenes I revised heavily to make the conversation between Lightsong and Blushweaver more snappy. I work very hard in the beginning of the book to establish their personalities and their dialogue, and so the first few chapters were revised more heavily than the later ones. Also, my editor thought that the later ones were already amusing enough; it was the beginning ones that he wanted to have a little more zip.

Their conversation about the weather (playing off the one between Lightsong and Scoot) is one of my favorites from the book. I like how it’s able to show some worldbuilding through the theology of the religion, a strong dose of character through the different ways that Lightsong and Blushweaver talk about the weather and their desires for how it should go, and all the while be snappy and amusing. The line about serving followers as food is a little cheap, though. Sorry.

Siri Enters and Sees Returned

Just a little note here. Returned live for eight days without a Breath, though the week is seven days long in this world. Why? Well, I figured that they’d need an extra day as leeway. On day seven, they start to grow weak and sluggish. If they don’t consume a Breath, their body will consume their own on the eighth day of their life, and they’ll die again.

In some parts of this world, Returned aren’t worshipped, but instead seen as something akin to vampires. They draw in Breath to survive, and need a supply of people to feed off of. They tend to wear black, since it’s the most powerful color for draining to Awaken things.

Oh, and since we’re on to random notes, I want to mention that I’m not intending Siri to ever betray who she is through the reversals of this book. When I say that she and Vivenna are switching places, I don’t mean that they’ll start acting like each other. Siri will always be the type who likes to feel the rain on her face and walk barefoot in the grass. Vivenna will probably always be the type who restrains herself from those kinds of activities.

My intention was to have them remain who they are, but still progress and learn to fill one another’s roles.

Vivenna Enters the Court

Color harmonics are one of the things in this book that, I think, have some very interesting philosophical implications. I’ve always been fascinated by the concept of perfect pitch. Pitches and tones are an absolute; music isn’t just something we humans devise and construct out of nothing. It’s not arbitrary. Like mathematics, music is based on principles greater than human intervention in the world. Someone with perfect pitch can recognize pure tones, and they exist outside of our perception and division of them. (Unlike something like our appreciation of other kinds of art, which is dealing with things that are far more subjective.)

However, I wondered if—perhaps—there are perfect steps of colors just like there are perfect tones, with color fifths, sevenths, and chords and the like. In our world, nobody has the ability to distinguish these things—but what if there were someone who could? Someone who could tell something innate about color that isn’t at all subjective?

I’m not sure if I explained that right, but it intrigued me enough to become part of this book.

Different Viewpoints in the Same Chapter

In the
Mistborn
books, most of the characters were either involved in the same plotline or separated from one another by distance. I missed being able to do what I did in
Elantris
, where I would show an event from the perspectives of characters who were involved in very different storylines.

The characters in
Warbreaker
are a little more focused on the same things, and are tied together by plots, but they’re also very separate. (At least at the beginning.) It’s fun for me as a writer to be able to show Lightsong, Vivenna, and Siri all attending the same event, but drawing very different experiences from it.

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Annotations for Chapter Fifteen

Siri Sees the God King

I think this is my favorite plotline of the book. The Siri/God King one, I mean. It’s hard to choose, but this is the one that I felt most interested in. (Though Lightsong’s ending chapters are powerful too.)

I wanted the God King to be an enigma, much like Vasher is, at the beginning of the book. Well...that’s not quite true. Right at the beginning, I wanted him to be scary and dangerous. I wanted the reader to perceive him as Siri did.

By now, however, you should be wondering more. Who is he? What are his motives? Is he angry with her or not?

The driving force behind this, actually, is the Lord Ruler. In
Mistborn
, a part of me always felt that he was just a little too stereotypical an evil emperor. True, I worked hard to round him out, particularly through the later books. But writing him made me want to take an evil emperor archetype in a very different direction.

I’ve spoken on the reversals in this book. Well, one thing I realized after the fact is that the novel is—in a lot of ways—about reversals of my own writing. Things I’ve done before, but taken the opposite direction. Almost like I need to react against myself and explore things in new ways, particularly in cases where (like the Lord Ruler) I did things that were more conventional to the genre.

I think that’s why this book has so much resonance with my previous books. Or maybe it doesn’t really, and I’m just seeing something that doesn’t exist. A lot of my ideas in writing, however, come from seeing something done in a movie or a book (or even in one of my own books) and wondering if I could take it a new and different direction. I hope that doesn’t make me feel like I’m repeating myself.

Lightsong Kneels before the God King

My vote for most thoughtful line of the first chunk of the book? Lightsong’s comment that he’d found that make-believe things were often the only things of substance in people’s lives. (Not quoted directly.)

It’s a little bit cynical, yet somewhat hopeful as well. As Lightsong perceives it, it’s true.

Kalad’s Phantoms

Kalad used to be Khlad, by the way. I didn’t want his name to sound so Pahn Kahlish, which I signify with the extra ‘h’ sounds to give them an airy feel to their words. I added the mythology of Kalad’s Phantoms to the book late in the process, wishing to give some more depth to the superstitions of the world. And perhaps do some other things too...

Vivenna Sees Vasher

I’m sorry that we don’t get to see Vasher as much as you all want. I considered adding more chapters in—I considered it several times during several rewrites. In the end, I just decided that his viewpoints had to remain in the early chunks of the book. If you see too much of what he’s doing, it will give away things I don’t want to give away. I don’t like having viewpoints that fail to reveal things about the characters and their emotions and plans. It feels like I’m lying to the reader when I hide things the viewpoint character knows. I avoid it when I can (though I can’t always—reference Kelsier in
Mistborn
).

Either way, I just decided to keep Vasher as he was, with only occasional appearances.

Life Sense as Part of the Magic

The ability of the Heightenings and Breath to give people an added dose of life sense was part of my attempts to make Awakening, as a magic system, feel more visceral and real. Allomancy is a great magic system, but I wanted a different feel here. In Allomancy, the powers granted are more like superpowers; with Awakening, I wanted something that felt...well, closer to what people already do.

Perfect pitch and perfect color recognition are two things that I think resonate this way; the ability to bring inanimate objects to life may seem wildly superpowerish, but I think it’s a part of our own superstition and mythology—or at least the superstition and mythology of our past. Life from things inanimate, like spontaneous generation, was long assumed as something real. Witches were often thought to be able to bring sticks or bundles of cloth to life.

I think that there’s still a lot of superstition in our modern world regarding how it feels to have someone watching you. We are more aware of our surroundings, sometimes, than we realize. I think we attribute a supernatural connection to some of these things. Who knows? Maybe there is one. I don’t know, perhaps I’ve got a bit of it myself.

Enhancing this and making it part of the magic was a way to get the visceral feel I was looking for. It also plays off the idea that by giving up your Breath, you give up part of your life. The fact that Drabs can’t be noticed by life sense allows me to show that they have taken one more step toward being objects themselves.

BioChroma. It turns objects into living things, but turns living things into objects as well.

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Annotations for Chapter Sixteen

Lightsong Listens to the Priests Discuss War

Is this an antiwar novel? I’m not sure, honestly. I didn’t sit down to write one, certainly. I rarely try to interject messages into my books, though sometimes they worm their way in. (The
Alcatraz
books are particularly bad about this.)

Certainly, a war here would be a bad thing. Idris and Hallandren shouldn’t be involved in trying to kill one another. But am I, myself, antiwar? Well, again, I don’t know how to answer that.

Is anyone prowar? War is a terrible, terrible thing. Sometimes it’s necessary, but that doesn’t make it any less terrible. I’m no great political thinker. In fact, being a novelist has made me very bad at talking about political topics. Because I spend so much time in the heads of so many different characters, I often find myself sympathizing with wildly different philosophies. I like to be able to see how a person thinks and why they believe as they do.

I didn’t mean this to be a book about the Iraq war—not at all. But war is what a lot of people are talking about, and I think it’s wise to be cautionary. War should never be entered into lightly. If you ask me if the Iraq war was a good idea, you’ll probably find me on both sides of the argument. (Though I certainly don’t like a lot of aspects about it, particularly how we entered it.)

Regardless, this isn’t a book about anything specific. It’s a story, a story told about characters. It’s about what they feel, what they think, and how their world changes who they are.

As a very, very wise man once said, “I don’t mind if my books raise questions. In fact, I like it. But I never want to give you the answers. Those are yours to decide.” —Robert Jordan. (FYI, that’s not quoted exactly. I can’t even quote myself exactly, let alone other people.)

The High Priest Tells Siri She Needs to Produce an Heir

Note that in a previous section where I said that I couldn’t delve as deeply into Siri’s plot in this book as I could have in one where there was only one viewpoint character, I didn’t mean that I didn’t intend to give her a lot of political intrigue and plot twisting. I only meant that I decided it was best to keep things a little more focused for her, rather than adding a lot of subplots.

I’ve been wanting to do a story like this one, with a woman sent to marriage in a politically hostile country, since I wrote
Elantris
—where Sarene arrived and found out her wedding couldn’t happen. Again, this is an attempt to turn in a new direction for me, but the inspiration is the same. Sarene arrived and found that her fiancé had died and the court didn’t care about her. Siri arrives and does get married, then has far too many people paying attention to her.

Siri and Lightsong Interact

This chapter has our first real melding of several viewpoints. In a way, it’s a focus chapter for that reason. All four viewpoint characters, who have been off doing other things, congregate here, meeting and mixing. Lightsong and Siri, whose plotlines influence one another a fair amount, sit and talk for the first time. Vivenna and Vasher, who are far more intertwined through the story, meet eyes for the first time.

Vasher shouldn’t have brought Nightblood. But he’s always a little afraid to leave the sword alone for too long. That can have...consequences.

Anyway, it was good to be able to show an interaction between two of the viewpoint characters in the form of Siri and Lightsong. This lets us see how Siri acts through the eyes of another, and I think this scene here is one of the first where we really get to see into Lightsong’s soul.

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Annotations for Chapter Seventeen

Vivenna Returns to a Ransacked Home

I’m a little annoyed at myself that it took so long for me to introduce Jewels. Here we are in chapter seventeen and she still hasn’t shown up. She barely gets a mention here. Unfortunately, I knew that her arrival would present problems for Vivenna, so I felt the need to put it off until Viv was attached enough to the mercenaries that she’d be able to overlook a certain “pet” that Tonk Fah talked about earlier.

Vivenna Reads Her Father’s Letters to Lemex

So, is what Dedelin did wrong? I don’t know. Again, I’m not here to give answers. He did what he felt he needed to do. Getting Lemex into the Court of Gods was an extremely important task. Without access to the assembly sessions, he had to rely upon paying people who could get in to take notes. Much better to get your spy in there himself. Unfortunately, the easiest, best, and least obtrusive way to do this was to get Lemex a pile of Breaths.