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Authors: Brad Watson

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So I don't think of the tradition as a burden at all. Thank the gods for it. I read Faulkner, O'Connor, Welty, Robert Penn Warren, and listen to their sentences as I read, try to understand their visions of the world on their own terms as well as how they may give language to my experience. I want their language and vision to inform my own, to educate me about what I already know on some level and about what I did not know before reading them. I think Eliot was right in “Tradition and the Individual Talent” there is no way we cannot be a part of and extend a tradition, in some sense, as writers. I'm embarrassed when I see someone obviously straining to be different because they think it's weak-minded and boring not to be different. Did Cormac McCarthy adore Faulkner? I don't know him, but it seems to me that he did, and his first novel sounds very much like Faulkner, to me. By “Suttree,” he'd taken what he learned from Faulkner and made something entirely his own, though the influence is still obvious. Now we have writers who sound like McCarthy, and that's okay with me. They're learning something new from him.

One of the most beautiful aspects of the novel is the way you capture the thoughts of older people, and the physical aspects of aging. You're not such an old guy yourself…how did you research that?

In the company of old people, listening to them, watching them. And by being something of an old soul, myself. I'm a cranky old man in a middle-aged body. I always loved and respected my older relatives, though, loved to listen to them talk, tell their stories, vent their anger over long-held grudges and disappointments. Most of my older relatives—though not all—were cheerful and bright, but they all had some tough stories. These people were the most alive of all the people I knew; they lived more in the moment than young or middle-aged people, even though they loved to revisit the past. The spoke directly, they told the truth and didn't care about the consequences. They didn't have time for polite lies, anymore. I loved that. If I could get away with acting like an old man all the time, I would.

So your grandmother was a model for Birdie Wells Urquhart—how do you think she'd take to your publicizing her secrets this way? If she is watching from heaven, aren't you in trouble?

Unlike my grandmother, I don't subscribe to the notion that people go to a heaven that is much like earth (conceived apparently by an earth-bound mind), only grander and less troubled. (See answer to question one, above.) But if Mimi's spirit is with me, in some sense, I sense humor as well as admonishment. She used to tell what she considered awful things about herself, as well as others, and be horrified by them, and then laugh at them. Maybe you live to be ninety-three by not being so resistant to the things that happen in life, I mean by accepting them and moving on. She, for one, did not hold a grudge, even against those who had mistreated her terribly, and did not excessively mourn her losses, until her last years, when she grieved most that she was still alive while her children had already died. She complained about that, thought she was living too long. I loved her very much, still do, and she knew that I loved her.

Besides, the secrets she told me weren't really secrets, and I invented the rest. Mimi didn't read fiction, but I'll never forget what she said to me after reading my first published story, which was a little bawdy: “Well, I know you're a good boy, anyway.” She meant, “in spite of what you've written.”

The novel blurs the distinctions between life and death in interesting ways—most provocatively, in a scene with the undertaker's young son that some people might find offensive—what's that all about?

I hope not too many people find Parnell Grimes's latent necrophilia (as I call it) offensive. Parnell knows his desire is wrong, perverted, grotesque, and he seeks some kind of salvation from it, which he finds in his wife, Selena (who understands him and does not condemn him). And I tried to write about Parnell's troubling desires in a way that shows him to be a fundamentally good man, one of the most compassionate people in the novel, in spite of his problem and being a kind of weird, goodhearted fool. In a strange way, his great love for other people, his compassion, contributes to his problem. It's a darkly comic vision, of course, this character. I enjoy certain kinds of morbid humor; I can't be alone in that, in a country that made Edward Gorey a bestseller. Maybe Flannery O'Connor would have written about such a character, had she been born thirty or forty years later, and done a better job of it. I don't know.

Concerning the scenes when the world of the dead and the living merge in other ways, such as when Finus sees his dead wife in a chair in his bedroom, or hears her voice through a stray cat in the graveyard, I was playing with some sort of notion about the ephemeral nature of earthly life, I think, and the sense that we commune in all kinds of ways with the dead, ways that aren't spooky or supernatural or weird; they're with us always, in a real sense, if we cared about them.

In the scenes with Birdie after her death, I like to think a reader can see her spirit travel as either real or as a moment of compressed time and brain travel in the moments between life and death, the moments when the body has given up and some sort of residual energy still exists in the brain. A hugely imaginative time, I would think.

How exactly do you describe the relationship between your two main characters, Finus Bates and Birdie Wells? If this is a kind of love story, why didn't you let them get together and live happily ever after?

I think all too often people don't end up with the love of their lives. They end up with someone they love okay and they stick it out, or they don't. Finus and Birdie never get together, and to some extent it's a result of the bad timing, the odd luck of timing, that so often keeps people who seem right for each other apart. We've all had it happen: a love at first sight that tears our hearts out instantly, but we're committed to someone, or they are, and we don't act. Same with these two. It's a shame, when that sort of thing happens. But there usually are shameful consequences, sometimes ruinous, that follow if we do act.

I didn't have a real vision of Finus and Birdie as a couple, a vision of what their lives together would have been, until one night late in the time I was revising the book. I'd met some friends at a nice restaurant in Cambridge, and this older couple kind of shuffled up to the hostess to inquire about a table. They stood there a while, waiting, holding hands. They were older, and kind of frail, but there was something obviously beautiful about them, individually and as a couple. I had the strongest sense that these people were as much in love as when they first fell in love, and it seemed to me that they were in a sense Finus and Birdie. It added something, I think, to the last draft, seeing that couple.

DISCUSSION QUESTIONS

  1. Barry Hannah, in a comment on Brad Watson's first collection of stories,
    Last Days of the Dog-Men
    , wrote: “Watson's people are the wretched dreams of honorable dogs.” In this, Watson's first novel, what seems to be his view of human—and animal—nature?
  2. Would you describe Watson's writing as earthy or lyrical? What characteristics dominate in his prose and how do they affect his portrayals of individual characters? How do elements of his style influence the book's intermingling of the living and the dead? Does Watson's prose evoke or suggest a larger world view?
  3. How does Finus's radio broadcast set the stage for the rest of the novel, in terms of both narrative and theme? Did Finus's cosmic reflections strike you as profound or eccentric?
  4. Some of Watson's characters seem to have an intimate connection with a world or dimension beyond the strictly material world of the present. How does this affect their ability to relate to the “real” world? What is it about Watson's prose that makes this “other” world seem normal and understandable to the reader? Would you describe this other dimension as magical or spiritual in a conventional sense?
  5. Time, memory, and desire are traditionally construed as elements of earthly existence that are no longer relevant in the afterlife. Would you say that Watson turns that idea on its head? Is there some way in which time, memory, and desire in this novel are elements of a “life beyond” that surrounds us even while we're living?
  6. Is this identifiably a “Southern novel”? Why? How is the Southern literary tradition distinct from writing from the rest of America? Is this related to the issue of race?
  7. Did you find Watson's portraits of Vish, Creasie, and Frank offensive? Why, or why not? Is the reader invited to see these characters differently from the way the white characters in the book see, or don't see, them? Do we get any idea of how they might see themselves?
  8. How do Watson's influences show themselves, and do they add to or subtract from the originality of his novel? Do the “ghosts” of Southern literature overwhelm his work or does he manage to keep them in their place, and how? What elements remind you of Faulkner, Welty, O'Connor, or other writers?
  9. “The heaven of mercury” is the second circle of heaven in the “Paradiso” of Dante Alighieri's fourteenth-century religious allegory,
    The Divine Comedy
    . What was Watson trying to achieve with such an allusion in the title of a novel about twentieth-century Mississippi? One reviewer commented that the title was the weakest part of the book—do you agree? What about the author's choice to use mock Latin chapter titles—does that work with, or against, the “Southernness” of the novel?
  10. Does the community in Mercury change from the beginning to the end of the novel or does it seem to be suspended in time? How, if at all, does the outside world affect the way the story plays out?
  11. Fellow southern novelist Larry Brown was one of many who compared Watson's novel not only to Faulkner but also to South American novelist and Nobel Prize winner Gabriel García Marquez. What does Watson have in common with García Marquez? Are the fabulistic elements in the book examples of “magic realism,” or are they really fantasies of the individual characters? What is the role of dreaming and fantasy in this book?
  12. Does Watson effectively combine an intimacy with his individual characters with a larger overview of their lives? What is gained and what is lost in his narrative strategy?
  13. Is the narrator omniscient? How does the novel's use of various points of view shape the narrative and, ultimately, the book's view of the world, or your view of the book?
  14. Finus is an old man when we are told the story of his love for Birdie Wells and of life in Mercury. Watson claims that his older relatives were the most alive of all the people he knew. Why do you think he chose Finus as the main character? How do you think his age affects the tone and pace of the book?
  15. In an interview, Watson explained that when he first started writing this book, he was thinking about the idea of communion between the living and the dead. Does this novel believe in an afterlife, or transcendence? If so, of what kind?

THE “WATSON” POEMS

Even an author can become a character in someone else's work and imagination. A long-time friend of Brad Watson's, accomplished poet Michael Pettit, has been writing “Watson poems” since the days when both were in graduate school in creative writing at the University of Alabama, and Pettit, his life in transition, was spending nights on Watson's couch. In a comparably transitional frame of mind, Watson was considering leaving graduate school and becoming a navy fighter pilot. Thus the genesis of “Blue Angel,” reprinted below. Over time, however, like most fictional characters, Pettit's “Watson” began to take on an independent life of his own. (Unlike Pettit's Watson and Watson's Finus, the author of
The Heaven of Mercury
was never assigned to a newspaper's obit page.)

BLUE ANGEL

It goes time, indolence, boredom,

depression and Watson figures his way out

is at twice the speed of sound. It's booze

tonight though, sitting home with thoughts

of Navy jets, Mach II, and the blues

he'll leave behind like the sudden sonic boom

that shatters the farmer's rain gauges,

drives his milk cows and wife crazy.

Watson uncorks his bottle, already over

the next flat state, delighted and busy

doing a swift 1,500 miles per hour.

Glassy-eyed, he turns the pages

of a glossy book: F-104 Starfighters,

the XP-86 Sabre jet, an F-4 Phantom.

Behind each dark-tinted canopy

he sees his own face: composed, handsome,

heroic. And it's there amid the debris

of an airshow disaster, the four fires

on the desert, the four perfect black

columns of smoke. O to be a Blue Angel

burning, becoming wholly and finally air!

Watson knows how, step by step, the soul

can die in the living body. He'll make sure

they go together, and when they do, go quick.

 

PERDIDO KEY

Watson's found work, like a dime on a sunny street,

a happy accident. Salaried, living by the sea,

he's writing half the weekly news the Gulf Shores

Independent
prints. It's not the Sacramento
Bee
,

not the Boston
Globe
, but he's got a new used car

and a white fishing cap his press badge flashes from.

By dumb luck his beat is the water: the whole Gulf

is his, from the Miracle Mile to Mobile, every wave,

every beauty on a beach towel his to cover.

O happy Watson! O his deep tan, his bright smile,

his sharp pencil! So what happens? No news but what

he hunts up: shady sewer schemes, rapacious condo lords,

worthless lives of sleaze and greed. Current hot story?

A threat to the habitat, a threat to the very life

of the beach mouse. Diminutive, less than an inch long,

beach mice don't have half a chance without Watson.

He's discovered Perdido Key developers want high rises

rising where the beach mice roam. O none of that!

Watson grabs his cap and camera, follows tiny tracks

across the damp sands, across dry and windy sands.

Day and night he's by their sides, camping out

under the stars, sending back impassioned articles—

how the little mice live, how they eat, love, nest,

their lives happy until trapped with peanut butter

and shipped off to make room and to make money

for out-of-state dentists and out-of-work locals.

Someone must stand by the beach mice. They are all

—Aren't they?—that stands between us and oblivion.

And so forth on page one, his byline black as a cloud.

So what happens? No one buys it. Who's he kidding?

Mice and oblivion? The
Independent
gets heavy mail,

negative, and Watson gets reassigned to—Where else?—obits.

 

HURRICANE WATSON

O the wild winds! Great spinning flower of rain

blooming off in the Gulf, rising from warm waters

five miles high, a hurricane heads toward Watson.

Who today—Happy Birthday!—turns thirty,

whose big gift is this counter-clockwise tempest,

this tropical depression gone crazy.

He awaits it, spirit tossing like palm trees

the wind waves up and down the beaches.

As the loose air freshens—sigh to moan to wail—

Watson glories in the elemental: spitting rain

growing steady, scudding gray clouds lowering,

beasts and human beings scuttling for cover.

Not Watson, headed out into it, ace reporter

on assignment:
Our weather plane lumbers

through skies heavy as the heavy deep sea below.

The pilots lean into their instruments,

the navigator whispers numbers,

the weatherman's eyes widen.

So what if he doesn't return, so what

if this great storm scatters Watson's little plane

and he never makes its eye—that balmy paradise—

but spins over the wet, windswept world

for the short remainder of his life, howling

something we down here will hear as the wild,

wild wind. So what if Watson's blown away.

It's his birthday and he wants it, bad,

so why not, why the hell not, let him have it.

From
Blue Angel: Being the Sacred and Profane Life and Times of Watson, Founded on Fact
, by Michael Pettit. Copyright Michael Pettit. (“Blue Angel” and “Hurricane Watson” first appeared in the
Indiana Review
.)

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