Read The Dungeons of Torgar Online
Authors: Joe Dever
Tags: #Fiction, #Fantasy, #Lone Wolf, #Magnamund
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(
Blurb
) Replaced ‘
THE DUNGEONS OF TORGAR
’ with ‘
The Dungeons of Torgar
’. Replaced ‘lorestone’ with ‘Lorestone’. Replaced ‘lorestones’ with ‘Lorestones’.
(
The Story So Far
) Removed the quotation marks from ‘
koura-tas-kai
’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’. Replaced ‘Cloeasia, then’ with ‘Cloeasia, and then’. Replaced ‘purpose and’ with ‘purpose, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Darklord armies’ with ‘Darkland armies’.
(
The Game Rules
) Removed ‘that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied’. Placed ‘or below’ after ‘fall to zero’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Chart (you’ with ‘Chart. (You’. Replaced ‘Items).’ with ‘Items.)’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Magnakai Disciplines
) Added ‘The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every
Lone Wolf
book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.’ to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in
The Kingdoms of Terror
. Added ‘(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)’ to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced ‘knowledge mastery’ with ‘knowledge that mastery’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘weapons list’ with ‘
Weapons List
’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘blindness and’ with ‘blindness, and’. Replaced ‘roots and’ with ‘roots, and’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’. Added ‘If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’ from the
Equipment
section. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Equipment
) Removed ‘(see the inside front cover of this book)’. Replaced ‘currency of Anari’ with ‘currency of Eru’. Replaced ‘1 Gold Crown’ with ‘one Gold Crown’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘safe-keeping’ with ‘safekeeping’. Replaced all three occurrences of ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘Weaponmastery with a bow’ with ‘Weaponmastery with Bow’. Replaced ‘combat, therefore’ with ‘combat; therefore’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘your list’ with ‘your
Weaponmastery Checklist
’. Deleted ‘If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’. Replaced ‘the Elder Magi give you’ with ‘the Senate of Tahou give you’ to agree with
Section 1
. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Added ‘Potion of Alether (Backpack Items) This potion of strength will increase your
COMBAT SKILL
by +2 points when swallowed immediately prior to a combat. It lasts for the duration of one combat only. There is enough for one dose.’ to the list of items you may choose from in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
Rules for Combat
) Removed ‘on the inside back cover of the book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the
Random Number Table
’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead.’.
(
Levels of Magnakai Training
) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Lore-circles of the Magnakai
) Capitalized ‘bonuses’ in the title ‘Lore-circle Bonuses’.
(
Improved Disciplines
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Italicised ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘venoms or’ with ‘venoms, or’. Replaced ‘sacrifice or a’ with ‘sacrifice, or a’.
(
Magnakai Wisdom
) Replaced ‘The restoration of the Kai and the future of your homeland depends’ with ‘The restoration of the Kai and the future of your homeland depend’.
(
1
) Replaced ‘mid-summer's’ with ‘midsummer's’. Replaced ‘much-publicized’ with ‘much publicized’. Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Deleted ‘at the front of the book’. Capitalised both occurrences of ‘prince’. Replaced ‘tavern and’ with ‘tavern, and’.
(
4
) Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’. Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Magnakai rank’ with ‘Kai rank’ for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills or’.
(
6
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Drakkar fortress’ with ‘Drakkarim fortress’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
7
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘briefly, then’ with ‘briefly, and then’. Replaced ‘click’ with ‘
click
’.
(
8
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
9
) Replaced ‘battle smoke’ with ‘battle-smoke’.
(
11
) Replaced ‘delete this weapon’ with ‘delete this Weapon’.
(
14
) Replaced ‘Adamas's hand’ with ‘Adamas' hand’.
(
18
) Replaced ‘Primate or more’ with ‘Primate or higher’.
(
19
) Replaced ‘Magnakai rank’ with ‘Kai rank’ for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced ‘skill or have’ with ‘skill, or if you have’.
(
20
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘as if his body was’ with ‘as if his body were’.
(
22
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘phosphorous’ with ‘phosphorus’.
(
23
) Replaced ‘bushes and make’ with ‘bushes, and make’.
(
26
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
28
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
32
) Replaced ‘shoulder and primes’ with ‘shoulder, and primes’.
(
33
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(
35
) Replaced ‘sway, then’ with ‘sway, and then’.
(
36
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
43
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(
44
) Replaced ‘Drakkar sniper’ with ‘Drakkarim sniper’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
47
) Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
51
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘red beard and’ with ‘red beard, and’.
(
52
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
54
) Replaced ‘rock face’ with ‘rock-face’. Added ‘You may not use the Silver Bow of Duadon in this combat (if you possess this Special Item). If you have reached the rank of Tutelary and possess the Discipline of Weaponmastery, you only need deduct 2 points from your
COMBAT SKILL
if you do not possess a weapon-like Special Item.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
56
) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘your shoulder and’ with ‘your shoulder, and’.
(
59
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
60
) Replaced ‘hornet's nest’ with ‘hornets' nest’.
(
61
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(
62
) Replaced ‘rope and’ with ‘Rope and’.
(
63
) Replaced ‘The hail of arrows and the sight of your black-clad form lurching towards them makes’ with ‘The hail of arrows and the sight of your black-clad form lurching towards them make’.
(
66
) Replaced ‘Drakkar sniper’ with ‘Drakkarim sniper’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
67
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘foliage, then’ with ‘foliage, and then’.
(
70
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
72
) Replaced ‘rope and wind’ with ‘rope, and wind’.
(
73
) Replaced ‘battle smoke’ with ‘battle-smoke’.
(
75
) Placed the choice leading to
Section 102
first in the list.
(
76
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
77
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘about and’ with ‘about, and’.
(
78
) Placed the choice leading to
Section 14
first in the list.
(
80
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’. Replaced ‘torches that splutter’ with ‘torches that sputter’.
(
82
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(
87
) Replaced ‘shield wall’ with ‘shield-wall’.
(
88
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘cursed and’ with ‘cursed, and’ in the section and in the illustration's caption.
(
92
) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.
(
93
) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(
94
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’.
(
96
) Replaced ‘bonuses’ with ‘missile bonuses’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
98
) Replaced ‘Hail Pathfinder’ with ‘Hail, Pathfinder’.
(
101
) Replaced ‘more, then’ with ‘more, and then’.
(
104
) Replaced ‘jet black’ with ‘jet-black’.
(
106
) Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’. Replaced ‘You cannot escape the worst’ with ‘You escape the worst’. Replaced ‘Magnakai rank’ with ‘Kai rank’ for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(
107
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Placed the choice leading to
Section 139
first in the list. Replaced ‘Drakkar soldier’ with ‘Drakkarim soldier’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
109
) Replaced ‘Elite’ with ‘Élite’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Drakkar leader's armour’ with ‘Drakkarim leader's armour’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
110
) Replaced ‘horses, then’ with ‘horses, and then’.
(
113
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
114
) Replace ‘crosslegged’ with ‘cross-legged’.
(
115
) Replaced ‘horse's hooves’ with ‘horses' hooves’. Replaced ‘melee’ with ‘mêlée’.
(
116
) Replaced ‘creamy-coloured’ with ‘cream-coloured’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
117
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(
120
) Replaced ‘zig-zags’ with ‘zigzags’.
(
121
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
123
) Replaced ‘rope and’ with ‘Rope and’.
(
124
) Replaced ‘newly arrived’ with ‘newly-arrived’. Replaced ‘Here then are’ with ‘Here, then, are’.
(
126
) Replaced ‘pack move’ with ‘pack moves’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘combat and’ with ‘combat, and’. Replaced ‘If the fight lasts’ with ‘If you win, and the fight lasts’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
127
) Replaced ‘north a’ with ‘north, a’. Replaced ‘Kraagenskul’ with ‘Kraagenskûl’. Replaced ‘Talestria and’ with ‘Talestria, and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Adamas's tent’ with ‘Adamas' tent’.
(
129
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(
130
) Replaced ‘dagger’ with ‘Dagger’.
(
131
) Replaced ‘quiver and’ with ‘Quiver and’. Replaced ‘your bow’ with ‘your Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
134
) Replaced ‘Bolas’ with ‘bolas’.
(
140
) Replaced ‘you, and have’ with ‘you and have’. Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
142
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’. Replaced ‘delete this weapon’ with ‘delete this Weapon’.
(
144
) Replaced ‘cul-de-sacs’ with ‘
culs-de-sac
’.
(
145
) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the bridge and’ with ‘the bridge, and’.
(
147
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
148
) Replaced ‘battle smoke’ with ‘battle-smoke’. Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘battle frenzy’ with ‘battle-frenzy’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘heralds and’ with ‘heralds, and’. Replaced ‘Forward men’ with ‘Forward, men’.