Silences (8 page)
Authors: Shelly Fisher Fishkin
——. Telephone interview. Fall
1988.
Zinn, Maxine Baca, and Lynn Weber Cannon, Elizabeth Higgenbotham, and Bonnie Thornton Dill. “The Cost of Exclusionary Practices in Women’s Studies.” In Gloria Anzaldúa, ed.
Haciendo Caras: Making Face, Making Soul.
Aunt Lute Books: 1990. 29–41.
In Heaven a spirit doth dwell
“Whose heart-strings are a lute”;
None sing so wildly well
As the angel Israfel
. . . .
And the shadow of [his] perfect bliss
Is the sunshine of ours
. . . .
If I could dwell where Israfel
Hath dwelt, and he where I,
He might not sing so wildly well
A mortal melody,
While a bolder note than this might swell
From my lyre within the sky.
—Edgar Allan Poe
Had Milton’s been the lot of Caspar Hauser,
Milton would have been vacant as he.
—Herman Melville
If Goethe had been stolen away a child, and reared in a robber band in the depths of a German forest, do you think the world would have had
Faust
and
Iphigenie?
But he would have been Goethe still. At night, round their watch-fire, he would have chanted wild songs of rapine and murder, till the dark faces about him were moved and trembled.
—Olive Schreiner
If Tolstoy had been born a woman
. . .
—Virginia Woolf
If
. . . .
Originally an unwritten talk, spoken from notes at the Radcliffe Institute in 1962 as part of a weekly colloquium of members. Edited from the taped transcription, it appears here as published in
Harper’s Magazine,
October 1965.
(Several omitted lines have been restored; an occasional name or phrase and a few footnotes have been
added.)
1962
SILENCES
Literary history and the present are dark with silences: some the silences for years by our acknowledged great; some silences hidden; some the ceasing to publish after one work appears; some the never coming to book form at all.
What is it that happens with the creator, to the creative process, in that time? What
are
creation’s needs for full functioning? Without intention
of or pretension to literary scholarship, I have had special need to learn all I could of this over the years, myself so nearly remaining mute and having to let writing die over and over again in me.
These are not
natural
silences—what Keats called
agonie ennuyeuse
(the tedious agony)—that necessary time for renewal, lying fallow, gestation, in the natural cycle of creation. The silences I speak
of here are unnatural: the unnatural thwarting of what struggles to come into being, but cannot. In the old, the obvious parallels: when the seed strikes stone; the soil will not sustain; the spring is false; the time is drought or blight or infestation; the frost comes premature.
The great in achievement have known such silences—Thomas Hardy, Melville, Rimbaud, Gerard Manley Hopkins. They tell
us little as to why or how the creative working atrophied and died in them—if ever it did.
“Less and less shrink the visions then vast in me,” writes Thomas Hardy in his thirty-year ceasing from novels after the Victorian vileness to his
Jude the Obscure.
(“So ended his prose contributions to literature, his experiences having killed all his interest in this form”—the official explanation.) But
the
great poetry he wrote to the end of his life was not sufficient to hold, to develop the vast visions which for twenty-five years had had expression in novel after novel. People, situations, interrelationships, landscape—they cry for this larger life in poem after poem.
It was not visions shrinking with Hopkins, but a different torment. For seven years he kept his religious vow to refrain
from writing poetry, but the poet’s eye he could not shut, nor win “elected silence to beat upon [his] whorled ear.” “I had long had haunting my ear the echo of a poem which now I realised on paper,” he writes of the first poem permitted to end the seven years’ silence. But poetry (“to hoard unheard; be heard, unheeded”) could be only the least and last of his heavy priestly responsibilities. Nineteen
poems were all he could produce in his last nine years—fullness to us, but torment pitched past grief to him, who felt himself “time’s eunuch, never to beget.”
Silence surrounds Rimbaud’s silence. Was there torment of the unwritten; haunting of rhythm, of visions; anguish at dying powers, the seventeen years after he abandoned the unendurable literary world? We know only that the need to write
continued into his first years of vagabondage; that he wrote:
Had I not once a youth pleasant, heroic, fabulous enough to write on leaves of gold: too much luck. Through what crime, what error, have I earned my present weakness? You who maintain that some animals sob sorrowfully, that the dead have dreams, try to tell the story of my downfall and my slumber. I no longer know how to
speak.
*
That on his deathbed, he spoke again like a poet-visionary.
Melville’s stages to his thirty-year prose silence are clearest. The presage is in his famous letter to Hawthorne, as he had to hurry
Moby Dick
to an end:
I am so pulled hither and thither by circumstances. The calm, the coolness, the silent grass-growing mood in which a man ought always to compose,—that, I fear,
can seldom be mine. Dollars
damn me. . . . What I feel most moved to write, that is banned,—it will not pay. Yet, altogether, write the
other
way I cannot. So the product is a final hash . . .
Reiterated in
Pierre,
writing “that book whose unfathomable cravings drink his blood . . . when at last the idea obtruded that the wiser and profounder he should grow, the more and the more he lessened
his chances for bread.”
To be possessed; to have to try final hash; to have one’s work met by “drear ignoring”; to be damned by dollars into a Customs House job; to have only weary evenings and Sundays left for writing—
How bitterly did unreplying Pierre feel in his heart that to most of the great works of humanity, their authors had given not weeks and months, not years and years,
but their wholly surrendered and dedicated lives.
Is it not understandable why Melville began to burn work, then ceased to write it, “immolating [it]. . . sealing in a fate subdued”? And turned to occasional poetry, manageable in a time sense, “to nurse through night the ethereal spark.” A thirty-year night. He was nearly seventy before he could quit the customs dock and again have full time
for writing, start back to prose. “Age, dull tranquilizer,” and devastation of “arid years that filed before” to work through. Three years of tryings before he felt capable of beginning
Billy Budd
(the kernel waiting half a century); three years more to his last days (he who had been so fluent), the slow, painful, never satisfied writing and re-writing of it.
*
Kin to these years-long silences
are the
hidden
silences; work aborted, deferred, denied—hidden by the work which does come to fruition. Hopkins rightfully belongs here; almost certainly William Blake; Jane Austen, Olive Schreiner, Theodore Dreiser,
Willa Cather, Franz Kafka; Katherine Anne Porter, many other contemporary writers.
Censorship silences. Deletions, omissions, abandonment of the medium (as with Hardy); paralyzing
of capacity (as Dreiser’s ten-year stasis on
Jennie Gerhardt
after the storm against
Sister Carrie
). Publishers’ censorship, refusing subject matter or treatment as “not suitable” or “no market for.” Self-censorship. Religious, political censorship—sometimes spurring inventiveness—most often (read Dostoyevsky’s letters) a wearing attrition.
The extreme of this: those writers physically silenced
by governments. Isaac Babel, the years of imprisonment, what took place in him with what wanted to be written? Or in Oscar Wilde, who was not permitted even a pencil until the last months of his imprisonment?
Other silences. The truly memorable poem, story, or book, then the writer ceasing to be published.
*
Was one work all the writers had in them (life too thin for pressure of material, renewal)
and the respect for literature too great to repeat themselves? Was it “the knife of the perfectionist attitude in art and life” at their throat? Were the conditions not present for establishing the habits of creativity (a young Colette who lacked a Willy to lock her in her room each day)? or—as instanced over and over—other claims, other responsibilities so writing could not be first? (The writer
of a class, sex, color still marginal in literature, and whose coming to written voice at all against complex odds is exhausting achievement.) It is an eloquent commentary that this one-book silence has been true of most black writers; only eleven in the hundred years since 1850 have published novels more than twice.
**
There is a prevalent silence I pass by quickly, the absence of creativity
where it once had been; the ceasing to create literature, though the books may keep coming out year after year. That suicide of the creative process Hemingway describes so accurately in “The Snows of Kilimanjaro”:
He had destroyed his talent himself—by not using it, by betrayals of himself and what he believed in, by drinking so much that he blunted the edge of his perceptions, by
laziness, by sloth, by snobbery, by hook and by crook; selling vitality, trading it for security, for comfort.
No, not Scott Fitzgerald. His not a death of creativity, not silence, but what happens when (his words) there is “the sacrifice of talent, in pieces, to preserve its essential value.”
Almost unnoted are the foreground silences,
before
the achievement. (Remember when Emerson hailed Whitman’s
genius, he guessed correctly: “which yet must have had a long
foreground
for such a start.”) George Eliot, Joseph Conrad, Isak Dinesen, Sherwood Anderson, Dorothy Richardson, Elizabeth Madox Roberts, A.E. Coppard, Angus Wilson, Joyce Cary—all close to, or in their forties before they became published writers; Lampedusa, Maria Dermout
(The Ten Thousand Things),
Laura Ingalls Wilder, the “children’s
writer,” in their sixties.
*
Their capacities evident early in the “being one on whom nothing is lost”; in other writers’ qualities. Not all struggling and anguished, like Anderson, the foreground years; some needing the immobilization of long illness or loss, or the sudden lifting of responsibility to make writing necessary, make writing possible; others waiting circumstances and encouragement
(George Eliot, her Henry Lewes; Laura Wilder, a writer-daughter’s insistence that she transmute her storytelling gift onto paper).
Very close to this last grouping are the silences where the lives never came to writing. Among these, the mute inglorious Miltons: those whose waking hours are all struggle for existence; the barely educated; the illiterate; women. Their silence the silence of centuries
as to how life was, is, for most of humanity. Traces of their making, of course, in folk song, lullaby, tales, language itself, jokes, maxims, superstitions—but we know nothing of the creators or how it was with them. In the fantasy of Shakespeare born in deepest Africa (as at least one Shakespeare must have been), was the ritual, the oral storytelling
a fulfillment? Or was there restlessness,
indefinable yearning, a sense of restriction? Was it as Virginia Woolf in
A Room of One’s Own
guesses—about women?
Genius of a sort must have existed among them, as it existed among the working classes,
*
but certainly it never got itself onto paper. When, however, one reads of a woman possessed by the devils, of a wise woman selling herbs, or even a remarkable man who had a remarkable
mother, then I think we are on the track of a lost novelist, a suppressed poet, or some Emily Brontë who dashed her brains out on the moor, crazed with the torture her gift had put her to.
Rebecca Harding Davis whose work sleeps in the forgotten (herself as a woman of a century ago so close to remaining mute), also guessed about the silent in that time of the twelve-hour-a-day, six-day work week.
She writes of the illiterate ironworker in
Life in the Iron Mills
who sculptured great shapes in the slag: “his fierce thirst for beauty, to know it, to create it, to
be
something other than he is—a passion of pain”; Margret Howth in the textile mill:
