Dawn of the Dragons (32 page)

Read Dawn of the Dragons Online

Authors: Joe Dever

Tags: #Fiction, #Fantasy, #Lone Wolf, #Magnamund

BOOK: Dawn of the Dragons
2.32Mb size Format: txt, pdf, ePub

(
53
) Replaced ‘Sadly your’ with ‘Sadly, your’. Replaced ‘comes to’ with ‘come to’. Replaced ‘cold dark’ with ‘cold, dark’.

(
54
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’.

(
56
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘horse ready’ with ‘horse, ready’. Replaced ‘before, in’ with ‘before in’.

(
57
) Replaced ‘Eldenoran assault troops’ with ‘Eldenoran Assault Troops’.

(
58
) Replaced ‘the Tower’ with ‘the tower’.

(
59
) Replaced ‘points.)’ with ‘points).’. Replaced ‘coach, then’ with ‘coach, and then’.

(
60
) Replaced ‘land.” ’ with ‘land.’ ’.

(
61
) Replaced ‘tunic, ‘what’ with ‘tunic. ‘What’. Replaced ‘gulleys’ with ‘gullies’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘lest it detects’ with ‘lest it detect’. Replaced ‘In the name of the Gods’ with ‘In the name of the gods’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.

(
63
) Replaced ‘counter-charge’ with ‘countercharge’. Replaced ‘brigands’ with ‘Brigands’. Replaced ‘wave of brigands come’ with ‘wave of brigands comes’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’.

(
64
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘world, then Sommerlund’ with ‘world, Sommerlund’.

(
67
) Replaced ‘well then’ with ‘well, then’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.

(
69
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.

(
71
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘ultra-violet’ with ‘ultraviolet’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.

(
72
) Replaced ‘cry, ‘We’ with ‘cry. ‘We’. Replaced ‘follow’ with ‘Follow’.

(
73
) Replaced all occurrences of ‘war-dogs’ with ‘War-dogs’.

(
74
) Replaced ‘name: THE BARREL BRIDGE TAVERN’ with ‘name: ‘The Barrel Bridge Tavern’ ’.

(
75
) Replaced ‘say, ‘can’ with ‘say. ‘Can’.

(
76
) Replaced ‘discard’ with ‘shoulder’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
78
) Replaced all occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
79
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’. Replaced ‘A mass of images swirl’ with ‘A mass of images swirls’.

(
80
) Replaced ‘doormouse’ with ‘dormouse’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘lavas'’ with ‘Lavas'’. Replaced ‘herd of coppery-red dragons continue their’ with ‘herd of coppery-red dragons continues its’.

(
81
) Replaced ‘legs, With’ with ‘legs. With’. Replaced ‘grasssnake’ with ‘grass snake’.

(
82
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom battle-spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Battle-spell’.

(
84
) Replaced ‘Vellino’,’ with ‘Vellino,’ ’.

(
85
) Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
86
) Replaced ‘shout, ‘String’ with ‘shout. ‘String’. Replaced ‘stammers, ‘I’ with ‘stammers. ‘I’. Replaced ‘uneasily, ‘I’ with ‘uneasily. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Lucky Bucket inn’ with ‘Lucky Bucket Inn’. Replaced ‘Scade, with’ with ‘Scade with’. Replaced ‘muster, and’ with ‘muster and’. Replaced ‘newly mended’ with ‘newly-mended’.

(
87
) Replaced ‘cloud of arrows and bolts descend’ with ‘cloud of arrows and bolts descends’.

(
88
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
89
) Replaced ‘dagger’ with ‘Dagger’ since it can be taken. Replaced ‘heap of bones mark’ with ‘heap of bones marks’.

(
90
) Replaced ‘says, ‘I’ with ‘says. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘words: HALLS OF LEARNING’ with ‘words ‘Halls of Learning’ ’.

(
91
) Replaced ‘cards, then’ with ‘cards, and then’.

(
92
) Replaced ‘river Quarl’ with ‘River Quarl’. Replaced ‘forest of Salony’ with ‘Forest of Salony’. Replaced ‘great forest’ with ‘Great Forest’.

(
93
) Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and have’ with ‘Telegnosis and have’.

(
94
) Replaced ‘D’Val’ with ‘D'Val’. Replaced ‘Alema trail’ with ‘Alema Trail’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘salute, then’ with ‘salute, and then’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.

(
95
) Replaced ‘psi-surge’ with ‘Psi-surge’. Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’. Replaced ‘mass of images begin to swirl’ with ‘mass of images begins to swirl’.

(
96
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘psychic ability — Mindblend — as’ with ‘psychic
Mindblend
ability as’.

(
97
) Replaced ‘another, ‘cough’ with ‘another. ‘Cough’.

(
99
) Replaced ‘brings’ with ‘bring’. Replaced ‘saddlebags, then’ with ‘saddlebags, and then’.

(
100
) Replaced all occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘Gwynian, ‘Just’ with ‘Gwynian. ‘Just’. Replaced ‘longer, I’ with ‘longer; I’. Replaced ‘maximum permissible’ with ‘maximum number permissible’.

(
101
) Replaced ‘cry, ‘we’ with ‘cry. ‘We’. Replaced ‘feet first’ with ‘feet-first’.

(
102
) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
104
) Replaced ‘cried, ‘I'm’ with ‘cries. ‘I'm’. Replaced ‘while away’ with ‘wile away’.

(
105
) Replaced ‘D‘Val’ with ‘D'Val’. Changed incorrect link to
Section 253
to lead to
Section 235
. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.

(
106
) Replaced ‘points), then’ with ‘points); then’.

(
107
) Replaced ‘ambushers’ with ‘Ambushers’.

(
108
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.

(
109
) Replaced ‘1 Broadsword’ with ‘Broadsword’.

(
110
) Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’.

(
111
) Replaced ‘her majesty, and’ with ‘her Majesty and’. Replaced ‘reads: VANAMOR 280 miles’ with ‘reads ‘Vanamor 280 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘court cavalrymen’ with ‘Court Cavalrymen’. Replaced ‘by its East Gate and sets off towards the outlying village of Sharr. Here you cross the mighty River Phoen by way of a great stone bridge. On the far side of this bridge you notice a signpost which points to the east’ with ‘by its East Gate. Here you cross a great stone bridge on the far side of which is a signpost pointing to the east’ because both Sharr and the River Phoen are many miles to the northeast of Garthen near the city of Phoena (cf.
The Jungle of Horrors
Section 271).

(
112
) Replaced ‘facade’ with ‘façade’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘says, ‘I’ with ‘says. ‘I’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘words: HALLS OF LEARNING’ with ‘words ‘Halls of Learning’ ’.

(
113
) Added ‘(Remember to remove the Oede herb or Matho's Potion from your
Action Chart
.)’.

(
114
) Replaced ‘battle spells’ with ‘battle-spells’. Replaced ‘lavas'’ with ‘Lavas'’. Replaced ‘sky, ‘and’ with ‘sky. ‘And’. Replaced ‘wave of winged beasts come’ with ‘wave of winged beasts comes’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
115
) Replaced ‘anger and pain’ with ‘anger, and pain’.

(
116
) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(
120
) Replaced ‘Nathor, ‘it's’ with ‘Nathor. ‘It's’. Replaced ‘Hail Tranius!’ with ‘Hail, Tranius!’. Replaced ‘turn to 72’ with ‘turn to 72.’. Replaced ‘spluttering candles’ with ‘sputtering candles’.

(
121
) Replaced ‘time, I’ with ‘time; I’. Replaced ‘e'er’ with ‘e'en’. Replaced ‘smile, ‘I’ with ‘smile. ‘I’. Replaced ‘replies, ‘the’ with ‘replies. ‘The’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Stonewatch, in’ with ‘Stonewatch in’.

(
122
) Replaced ‘Kai alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’.

(
125
) Replaced ‘Discipline turn to 156’ with ‘Discipline, turn to 156’. Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(
127
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘flight of Lavas emerge’ with ‘flight of Lavas emerges’.

(
129
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
131
) Replaced ‘worse effects’ with ‘worst effects’.

(
132
) Replaced ‘gaoler, ‘I've’ with ‘gaoler. ‘I've’. Merged the paragraph that ends with ‘the cruel pincers’ with the following paragraph. Replaced ‘tough 'un’ with ‘tough un’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.

(
133
) Replaced ‘dug-out, then’ with ‘dugout; then’. Replaced ‘line of Eldenoran soldiers have’ with ‘line of Eldenoran soldiers has’.

(
134
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’.

(
135
) Replaced ‘smile, ‘they’ with ‘smile. ‘They’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.

(
136
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘shoulder, ‘you’ with ‘shoulder. ‘You’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘(imposters)’ with ‘(impostors)’. Replaced ‘guardsmen’ with ‘Guardsmen’. Replaced ‘horde of bogus castle guardsmen come’ with ‘horde of bogus castle guardsmen comes’.

(
138
) Replaced ‘bulls-eye’ with ‘bull's-eye’.

(
139
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’.

(
140
) Replaced ‘tersely, ‘he's’ with ‘tersely. ‘He's’. Replaced ‘Scade manor’ with ‘Scade Manor’. Replaced ‘Knight Tranius's guards’ with ‘Knight Tranius' guards’. Replaced ‘Knight Tranius's hunt’ with ‘Knight Tranius' hunt’.

(
141
) Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘back-handed’ with ‘backhanded’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of’ with ‘rank of Kai’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.

(
143
) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(
145
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.

(
146
) Replaced ‘birdsong’ with ‘bird song’.

(
147
) Replaced ‘winged-horrors’ with ‘winged horrors’. Replaced ‘your Monastery’ with ‘your monastery’. Replaced ‘monastery of the Kai’ with ‘Monastery of the Kai’. Replaced ‘quietly. ‘the’ with ‘quietly. ‘The’. Replaced ‘my men men’ with ‘my men’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘previous encounter’ with ‘previous experience’ because you may have encountered Lavas more than once in the past.

(
148
) Replaced ‘Magnakai healing disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline of Curing’. Replaced ‘chains, then’ with ‘chains, and then’.

(
149
) Replaced ‘outwardly appearance’ with ‘outward appearance’. Replaced ‘dead, then’ with ‘dead; then’.

(
150
) Replaced ‘damp uncomfortable’ with ‘damp, uncomfortable’. Replaced ‘away, then’ with ‘away; then’.

(
151
) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(
154
) Replaced ‘birdsong’ with ‘bird song’. Replaced ‘Vaderish brethren’ with ‘Vaderish Brethren’.

(
155
) Replaced ‘Kai sixth sense’ with ‘Kai Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘gang of scurrilous rogues emerge’ with ‘gang of scurrilous rogues emerges’.

(
156
) Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
157
) Replaced ‘emotion, ‘I'm’ with ‘emotion. ‘I'm’. Replaced ‘Reloni bridge’ with ‘Reloni Bridge’.

(
158
) Replaced ‘says, ‘yours’ with ‘says. ‘Yours’. Replaced ‘sky, ‘and’ with ‘sky. ‘And’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘side, so’ with ‘side; so’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘Mastery add’ with ‘Mastery, add’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and have’ with ‘Telegnosis and have’.

(
160
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘click’ with ‘
click
’.

(
161
) Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.

(
163
) Replaced ‘mastery of Kai-alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’. Added ‘If you possess both, add 6.’ in harmony with the recent Collector's Edition.

(
167
) Replaced ‘thug’ with ‘Thug’.

(
168
) Replaced ‘Sage, ‘I’ with ‘Sage. ‘I’. Replaced ‘recognise’ with ‘recognize’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘says: Quill Street’ with ‘says ‘Quill Street’ ’.

(
170
) Replaced ‘Silversmith's Guild’ with ‘Silversmiths' Guild’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
173
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
174
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’.

Other books

Seesaw Girl by Linda Sue Park
Animal Appetite by Susan Conant
Down River by Karen Harper
Her Heart's Desire by Lauren Wilder